neji's getting jealous

neji d hinata alluring OMG never in my life have I laughed so hard ! And tenten likes neji! What will happen if she finds out that neji likes hinata but is in denial?Does sher know that he likes hinata? So many questions.

aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh neji is gonna kiss HINATA!

I've never been much of a nejihina fan but with this story I might have to reconsider

I normally do not completely ship this pairing, however, this story blew me away! I love the consistency, plot development, character development, and the overall story in its entirety. It flowed beautifully, and everything came full circle. I also enjoyed Hiroshi's demise, maybe a little too much. Your devotion to human nature and the characters themselves are astounding, and I am jealous. I would never be able to pull a story of this magnitude off. I can honestly say that I did not dislike one part of this! Best wishes

The best darn story I ever read
Dang ! You really put it down

Adore esta fic de NejiHina ...oye podrías hacer otra temporada o otro fic que sea de nejihina y si lo haces que se bien bueno .

Awwww this soooo cute. This is fantastic you even got Hinata's birthday right, it's also my birthday me and hinata are birthday buddies but anyway love this so far it's tots adorbs

I loved the story! It was really amazing!
What you have to improve is nothing really. Just make sure that you are putting correct punctuation.
That's all!
Loved it, once more! Keep up the good work, please!
WonderRin

Ok, so let me get this straight: Neji spends nearly half this fic physically, mentally, and emotionally abusing Hinata... and we're supposed to be happy he ends up with her? Forcing kisses and bruising arms despite tearful pleadings of no
are the new Valentine's Day cards?
While his "true love" is away, he sleeps with his caretaker - only three times though, because oh, how he loves his Hinata *rolls eyes* - yet becomes jealous when Hinata is merely talking to another guy. However, that can be explained as we all know men DIE if they don't have their female stress relievers (sexist much?)... and if Hinata did the same, she's a slut.
He also takes advantage of the position Izanami is in (after all: she's a whore, they don't have feelings, right?) and his treatment of Tenten is even worse - yup, a real class act you've ended up with, Hina.

No woman of any sane mind would love her abuser; Kishimoto's overly saintly Hinata perhaps, but that's still a big maybe. In the end Neji still considers and talks of her as his "possession", though I'll admit he treats her better.
What I've never understood is how anyone can find this "cute", "romantic" and "sexy" - is this really what you people (author and reviewers) consider romantic? If yes, there's no wonder the number of rapes and cases of wife battering are so high.

Este fic es de los mejores que he leído, yo no leo muy bien el ingĺés pero lo traduje; es tan bello, ame el desarrollo de la historia, ojala hagas más historias NejiHina de este tipo, felicidades por tan excelente historia y mil gracias por traerla para todos nosotros.

I love this story. I'm already on ch. 16. I've been thinking though that you should totally make a naruhina story like this where they become best friends in the academy and everything. I think it would be cool.

Wow! ł seriously LOVED this! It was an amazing beautiful story that was written wonderfully! ł loved the ending it was adorable ;;) made me wanna cry! Beautiful story epic! ł loved it!

Good story so far, but him getting so mad just because she addressed him as sama was a little uncalled for and he overreacted. Could've had a bit of a better reason to hate her, but still a nice story

I absolutely loved this story. You're by far the best writer on this website. Keep up the great work in all of your endeavors.
Much love, Oshin