I just want to bawl because this story is over!

I love your story

Really cute

You gave her a claddagh - how wonderful! I'm imagining Irish ninjas now XD beautiful conclusion, though I'm glad to see some people (eg. Kiba) are still suspicious of Neji. It's hard to put all those years of being an ass behind.

You write Naruto so well - I'm a NaruHina fan too, so it's a little heartbreaking, but this story makes everything believable

Loved the fight, it was excellent and so emotionally charged

Loved the parallels between this chapter and the manga :) very well done!

This might be immature of me, but I'm really enjoying all of Neji's jealous rages rofl

I really liked how you had the elders manipulate an 11-year old that way. They're so deliciously evil XD

The scenes with Hinata and Naruto, and the confrontation between Naruto and Neji were the most adorable things ever I couldn't keep from squeeing inside. I thought it was really creative - how Naruto would notice Hinata and her mark and being shunned, and being drawn to her instead of having a crush on Sakura. Will this be a future love triangle? And isn't Hinata sort of 'cheating' on Neji? Hehehe...

Hahahaha. Neji is so...harsh and...comical. I like the moments he's having with Hinata. It's making my day.

I like Eiji. Call me crazy, but he seems like great company.

Gyah! I love this! Nyah! Kissing Naruto AND Neji?! AWESOME. She's sooo lucky, it's a shame she doesn't see that.

hehehehehehehehe. Tenten got rejected! Hahahaha! Take that! Yosh! The mission. I expect certain things to happen...hehehe.

No no no no no no no! Hinata! Oh, the poor girl. Neji is so clueless, but I do like this ending. Wow. Another cliff hanger.