*pain squeezes chest* HOW TERRIBLE! Neji is a what I call a jackazz. Loved this chapter, though.

Your fic was amazing. i enjoyed and savored everything. And I bet i would be repeating it after a while, hunger for it again. Hehe. The plot was very complex and i liked that your approach of using the "what if" concept which surely stimulated not only your reader's imagination but also yours. The development of characters were well-paced especially Neji's development. It always made me cringe imagining that he would show different emotions only just to one person, which made it more special and romantic.

To critic though, i observed that in some parts Possession, you tend to tell things rather repetitively, obviously, direct or too literal among characters when they try to explain something... i know you want it to make the twists and parts of the story clear to the readers, and that is a plus side, but sometimes, hints and small gestures that can exlpain things may spice things up a little and make your story intricately written... i hope you know what I meant. :( .

But all in all, after searching for good NejiHina fanfics (I am a die hard fan of this pairing by the way) yours was truly the best. i think the high number of chapters made it more enjoyable too and i am thanking for that dedication. I loved your story, all in all 9.2/10. haha.

Reminds me of the couple from Hot Gimmick if any of you know that manga. BUT WTH THIS CHAPTER WAS TOOO HOT. It doesn't have any illustrations but can still outmatch smutty mangas out there. Very vivid descriptions! Love it! Neji is very ... destructive isn't he?hahaha...

D'aaawwwwwww... :3 butterflies, butterflies everywhere

that was cute ending

aww that was such a cute weddinge

Finally! The asshole asks!

Intense. I almost cried.

Aww! Oh,my God! I think I just died due to cuteness overboard!

Adorable, so!

This was a really beautiful ending. With all the events that took place since the beginning, I would SO recommend those readers who are about to start on this story. Yeah, there will be moments our characters will go through so much pain but it'll be worth it in the end. A Hina/Neji story doesn't come as good as this even if it's an old story. _.

Finally, we're going to witness a moment have seen since loving childhoods. Enjoyable chapter.

Nice chapter, it seems our heroine is finally gonna take a stand now... Hopefully.

Dam, talk about getting your heart broken by political influence.

Hehe, wow, talk about young love _;