| Reviews for Possession |
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   EleosCior chapter 10 . 7/10/2023 Good thing this fic is complete or else I’m going to lose my mind waiting for the next chapter |
| EleosCior chapter 8 . 7/10/2023 Your version of this scenario is good. I like it. |
| EleosCior chapter 6 . 7/9/2023 Neji you jealous hottie.. you make me shiver! Love it! All the characters are awesome. The interaction are so good. And Naruto haha such a tease! Nice chap! |
| EleosCior chapter 5 . 7/9/2023 Aww my heart. That’s harsh Nejikun. Poor Hinatachan. Hitoshi.. you evil. Oh i forgot to mention that Naruto is so adorable from the previous chapter. You wrote him well too. Intense chapter! Fluffy babies no more *sigh* |
| EleosCior chapter 4 . 7/9/2023 *squeal* fluffy and adorable. Nice job! |
| EleosCior chapter 3 . 7/9/2023 I like Hizashi and Hiashi in your story. I like all the characters making the story even more exciting to read, that includes the elders haha |
| EleosCior chapter 2 . 7/9/2023 Oh so cute and adorable. I could oicture them with this scene. Naive yet so determined to be together. I couldn’t help but smile |
| EleosCior chapter 1 . 7/9/2023 So cute and lovely mini Neji and mini Hinita. I’m excited to read this. If only they’re not cousins they would be perfect for each other. They have this chemistry that is hard not to fell in love with. Neji’s love, hate and protectiveness and Hinata’s love and adoration. Both beautiful like a Prince and a Princess too. You wrote them well. Like their mini selves in canon. Thanks! Up to the next |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2022 Ngl, I love this Hiashi and Hizashi. They aren't stern assholes. |
| hiMe-iChi-uLqUi-gRim chapter 1 . 11/13/2022 I would beg you to make a sequel, but I think it will suffice to say PLEASE WRITE MORE NEJIHINA! XD P.S. Best NEJIHINA fic! Congratulations to your 2,000 reviews! |
| hiMe-iChi-uLqUi-gRim chapter 33 . 10/28/2022 Beautiful from start to finish. Definitely fav. Thank you for sharing! |
| Brother V chapter 9 . 8/4/2022 It's shadow clone dummy |
| roseannecult chapter 8 . 7/28/2022 I felt the pain in this chapter, all i have for neji is anger |
| roseannecult chapter 5 . 7/28/2022 Fcking elders for manipulating a 11 yr old kid. Despite that, i thought neji was smarter than that ! Well i know this was ooc but canon neji is definitely smarter than this! |
| Sasha chapter 33 . 7/25/2022 Hit loved the idea of hizashi-hiashi swap. To be honest,I have read first 7 chapters. Some things I have observed in your writing: 1. Flashbacks repetitions in writing seemed unnecessary and space-consuming 2. Often you're wordy when referring to the two main characters in a scene where there are just the two of them. 3. The sex scene learning curve seems really unrealistic - imo if neither of them knows how to have great sex, they're not gonna do great the first night. However I understand you didn't wanna make the story too lemon-y. 4. Appreciated that you went with over 20 chapters to deal with a Crazy toxic man 5. English is a language of consisness & consistency so try to keep that in mind when writing. Peace. Be a novelist! I couldn't read the middle chapters as I think the relationship btw the two was insanely toxic & no women would get out of it without serious life-long trauma. I especially did not appreciate them getting happy ever after, after all the physical & emotional abuse Neji caused Hinata. |