Reviews for At Least She's Alive
dragonlady222 chapter 11 . 5/23/2007
Good ending I knew they could do it!
dragonlady222 chapter 9 . 5/22/2007
Good chapter. Keith got what was coming to him. I hope this helps Serenity.
dragonlady222 chapter 8 . 5/22/2007
Good chapter. I feel bad for them all but especially for Marik and Serenity.
dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 5/22/2007
Poor Serenity. If she has even half of Joey's strength and courage she should make it just fine. I hope the therapist can help her.
dragonlady222 chapter 6 . 5/22/2007
Good chapter. I hope they can reach her.
dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 5/21/2007
Good, I'm glad they knew where to find him. His punishment will be justified.
dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 5/21/2007
Poor Serenity. I hope they can find Keith soon.
dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 5/21/2007
Good chapter. Are the Yami's helping this time?
Landi McClellan chapter 2 . 5/21/2007
The only constructive criticism I have to offer is that you need to watch how you do your dialogue. Dialogue is always in a different paragraph than the descriptive paragraph. Also, watch your pronoun usage.

Other than that, great story. It's an interesting plot, that's for sure.
dragonlady222 chapter 2 . 5/21/2007
Poor Serenity and Joey. I hope they find out who's doing this.
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
Good chapter. I hope you don't take it down again.

Poor Serenity, to be so used and tortured like that. Joey is going to kill someone.