Reviews for pudding!
Obzzezed chapter 2 . 12/12/2009
? Very Crazy! ROFLLMAO
Cattshire chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Is our quotation mark key broken or something? Ever heard of capitalizing? How come you capitalize the names but not the beginning of the sentences?
A Complete Waste of Space chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
well, they wouldn't be cannibals if they were animals. then they'd just be canivorous.
A Complete Waste of Space chapter 2 . 7/7/2008
what the hell is this?
Rev En Cas chapter 2 . 5/7/2008
Please, please, please tell me you were on crack or summat when you wrote this. Pleasse.

Because frankly?...this is lousy. Not terribly eye-corrupting bad, but lousy.

[''ok... bye!'' and with that she ran off laughing.]

Not exactly a decent response to the possibility of being eaten, I believe. But anyway.
sadisticb00gers-Modus Pwnage chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
A fourth grader could write better than this. Ever hear of quotation marks? "
venomoxide chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Wrath of Flaming Dragon chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
No shit this is your first story. Your grammar sucks ass. Fix it, or do the world a favor and delete it.


Frankly Serious chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
heres just some tips

use CORRECT grammar

never use it again in your whole life!

and you do know that characters need names and your story is a bit like ew.i mean you need MORE and or a lot of detail.
Kingdom Hearts 3D rocks chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
this story makes so sence and would probably have more purpose being posted on the fictionpress website. it does not belong on
AnonymousBystander chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Hey, just thought you might want to take this down from and post it on It's not really a fanfiction...

Well written though, and the idea is funny - would make for a good comic story.

So yes. people might just keep flaming you for no reason otherwise.
xXxdaisukexXx chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Hmm... imoto chan half term has driven you crazy. lol strange... average T chan. nice story i guess.!
Natabob chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
oh a town full of cannibals u must continue!
xYEMZx chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
That's a lot better then the others :)