Reviews for The Forbidden Shadow
bubble.duckie chapter 7 . 6/23/2011
I forgot to say that Kiwi is so cute! Reminded me a lot of Viper in Kung Fu Panda! Sort of like Kiyohime too! That's probably the reason why I collected the Mcdonalds Happy meal toys because Viper is there haha!
bubble.duckie chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
Talk about whirlwind romance! Hmm I'm still kinda lost maybe I have to re-read this to better understand. You are writing ShizNat though so that means I'll cheer you on. Yay! Gogogo!
bubble.duckie chapter 3 . 6/22/2011
What? She's blind! Oho! I guess I now know how she'd get back her sight!
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Wow one after the other! I've recently finished a MH angtsy fic and here's another one! D mm that stupid SOB doing that to Nat! Let me at him and I'm gonna effin' Kiki him! Affected much!
Ginukuemau chapter 11 . 6/13/2009
This story really confuses me but please continue it and please try to make it a little less confusing
Ume sama chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
This a really great story. I really wish you would continue it.
yui1808 chapter 11 . 7/30/2008
one year of no update?
yui1808 chapter 7 . 7/30/2008
creepy chapter...
yui1808 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
ei do you still need a beta? anyway, how come you mentioned that it was her first time seeing the color green? she's blind right, not color blind...
yui1808 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
that was harsh... damn than bastard! i hate father's like that if you can even call him a father...
MelodicFlan chapter 8 . 7/26/2007
Japanese names or American names? or random? .; I'll just make up a random name .

Host: Katsuragi, Junpei (last, first)

Girl: Cattefre (catafree for pronounciation), Karen

Boy: Chan, Hiro

lol
MelodicFlan chapter 7 . 7/26/2007
. I'm a little lost o.o; Where's the SHIZNATNESS? Lol .; Sigh I'm getting impatient, I have my own Shiznat stories to write and post but I'm too lazy. I've even completed them too lol .. My last fanfics was like 5 years ago? Talk about poor grammar...I was looking back at my previous works, and I was like OMFG bad bad bad quality O.O;. Hmm there are some grammatical errors in this chapter; maybe I'll list them next time
MelodicFlan chapter 6 . 7/26/2007
Why is Kiwi not Kiyo? I'm just wondering, but I don't have anything against it. O.O Talk about rush or maybe love at first sight .; That's why I never liked Shakespeare lol. I like ShizNat though O.O;
MelodicFlan chapter 5 . 7/26/2007
O.O; eh o.O; The confession was so fast O.O; But good job lol o.o;...
MelodicFlan chapter 3 . 7/26/2007
T_T? Why doesn't this have more reviews O.O;! That's bad! This story is really nice so far. Keep it up and update soon!
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