Reviews for The Chronicles of 'What If'
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Hahaha. This is amusing! Started out funny then ended in hotness!
ShizNatPower chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Soda.Holic chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
ROFL , I remember Shizuru doing the last part (turning in her sleep while blushing) ... might you be the director? *giggle* XD ah yesh this might be her dream if you are XP
jquackers chapter 1 . 1/18/2009

That was the most hilarious and perverted dream I've ever read about. XDD
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
lol that was quite funny. The ending was unexpected. lol
true.tears chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
haha that was so cute!

I loved the way you described everything.

so anime P

I wish you were the director of mai hime now xD

hope you write more of these P
Kara Papas chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
So, yeah, I'm just hopping around reading odd stories...not that this one is odd. I actually found it very funny. like nosebleed funny. LOL
kikyo4ever chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
i hope you have many many 'what if' shiznat coming...

i know i'm waiting so i want you to know that.
KuroMewMew chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Lmao, as expected: a crazy story from a crazy person O.o! the part where the skirt goes 'wee' was ... ** and um doesn't the door of the council room slide :P? desk would have been useless in that case, anyway I'm not complaining xD! I loved it!
jam-chan chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
why cant u b the one to own mai hime?

*drools* what if u were the director of mai hime...

nice chp
damn unique chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
you are ikezu!moar why was it just a dream?anyway good soon
shiznats chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
wow...u made my day again...already red this someother part...don't remember where...thank so much...
TwinBladeWarrior chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
aha! i see what you did there

That part in episode 4 when the 'bait' is all set out and Harukas rampaging about shizuru

she does look rather red faced come to think about it


you may jsut be onto somehting here

must dash