Reviews for Save the Last One
NerdyAnimeFangirl chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I really enjoy your writing style and how you interpret characters; it's like you expand on their personalities instead of relying solely on what the anime reveals about them. This shows in /all/ of the work I've read by you so far.
Ordinarily I'd wish for more romantic or sexual content in yaoi fan fiction, but your interesting style more than made up for it. Your work, if not anything else, is very exciting.
HEARTxOFxTHExSTORM chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
This is super cute! I really enjoyed it 3
R i s a chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
My goodness.

My brain exploded from the epicness XD

No but really the imagery here was excellently rendered and the relationship was well defined without obvious words. I like showing not telling and you did that particularly well with the dream Mugen had about finding Jin, which was a well done metaphor that I enjoyed.

THE ENDING WAS AMAZING and I wish this could continue, but as all good one shots come to an end, so must this one.
Sweet Wisteria chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Very nice. Very... Jin and Mugen. If there was ever slash in samurai champloo, this would be it. 3
Sear chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
So fucking awesome, espcially the dream sequences. Very nice post!aestethic-but-very-WTF-they-can't-do-that-ending.
niina chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
ahh, I say, as if I know everything.

that was good.
WootYaoi chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
That was so cute! Great writing, too. Well done!

Tuli Azzameen chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
very well done, it puts a very interesting spin on the character dynamics. so many jinmugens are out of character and ruined by excessive raunchyness, but not this one, very nice story! quite well written too!
aoh chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
real cool
Night-Mare-Chan chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
-burbles inchoherently for a moment- That ending. It was...just the most awesome thing. The whole story was great, the undertone of longing, the small subtle ways that you could tell, you could just TELL. And the ending. OMG. I loved the way Mugen brushed Jin's wrist. It's so simple but so erotic at the same time. Gave me the shivers. I love how you can portray passion without them glomming all over one another. Though the fuzzy beans was a nice touch.

Wonderful. Excellent. Brava. I'd squeal like a fangirl (which I am) but I'm in the library and I don't think that they'd appreciate it. You came reccommended on fanficrants and I'm glad I took them up on it. :D Thank you for making my day.
hink chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
folean chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
wow um wow you just killed one of my alltime favourite shows i hope your proud
ElvenDestiny chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
An absolutely gorgeously written story. I especially loved the ending and how in character it was for Jin. The emotions were real and understated, similar to in the actual series, and it played out at a perfect pace. Major kudos to you for such fantastic writing, and I hope to see more from you!

- E.D.
aoh chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
well, "ah" !
Comtess chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
A wonderful story!
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