Reviews for Ode to the Avocado
ggfan01 chapter 3 . 5/29/2007
I love how you are writing this story! I can't wait to read more!
Butterfly Dreamer chapter 3 . 5/26/2007
I like this. It's angsty..and Rory's not a perfect goody two shoes. I like the first person narrative too. It's done well. Update soon please!
Krinaia chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
I love the way you wrote their first meeting post-breakup. The tension was so heavy between the characters, I was physically cringing for Rory's sake.

Write more soon!
iamnotrecluse chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
aw...this chapter was so angst ridden

it made me sad and want to fix it for them

you should fix it for them! but i know u would have no story if u did it now

but please update soon! i like it a lot
Janey chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Wow, you're good! I mean that, too.

I can't wait for the next chapter, and I like the realistic way you had him not show up at the meeting, and you had her go through the heartwrenching despair. You've created so much suspense.

I hope she fights for him and they end up together (of course), or at the very least, get a proper goodbye in. I will be eagerly anticipating the update.

Again: wow, you're good!
just hidden chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
"My botched farewell had no embrace, no kiss. His fingers brushed against mine when I held out the ring for him to take. That’s all there was." i know! this is the hardest thing for me to endure about their break up. there was no way she was going to say yes on the show, but in the two episodes with the marriage question there was not a single kiss. that's just wrong. “I can deal with you thinking I’m interesting. For now.” better than dull and repetitive. "The post-college “single life” is everything that Carrie Bradshaw and Paris Gellar had warned me about." what wonderful sources. "Thank God my cerebellum seemed to be functioning, or I would have keeled over from holding my breath." wow, the cerebellum. nice. “Okay. I should go then.” aww. it's not the end. there will be more. great job. can't wait to see when they meet again, and everything in between.
GEORGEXXX chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
This fic is utterly amazing and realistic!

And I keep hoping that it is rated M because of future chapters. LOL.
Curley-Q chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Rory and Logan really need to talk!
the road to damascus chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
god that ending was completely and totally deflating and disheartening
crissy chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
that's kind of sad. i don't like such permanent endings.
roryloganforever chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
This is a great story. Please keep going. I could see this happening after the finale.
anonymous chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Ack! That was such a painful ending to the chapter. Well, I suppose that if you have them get back together, it's not going to be easy (because where would the fun be in that?). Looking forward to more!
Logans chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
This story is so good, but it is so depressing! I guess that goes to show how good of a writer you are, I'm pretty sure this story has evoked more emotion from me than the actual final 2 episodes which I have found really easy to ignore and pretend didn't happen.

Even though each additional chapter I read breaks my heart more, I do have hope that things will get better, for several reasons:

1. If this is this depressing to read, it must be even worse to write, and I can't imagine voluntarily wanting to go through that without any hope of a payoff.

2. Story is rated M. There's got to be something coming to warrant this.

So here's to Rory not getting her closure, but for keeping this open the rest of her life, because one day Rory and Logan will find each other again and heal their wounds, get married, and produce the cutest little babies around.

Keep up the great work!
AlwaysHoldingOn chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
aw that was soo sad, make her do something! please I was about to cry but I held it back, i loved it! great job, you always do a great job! really that was so heartbreaking!
Starlight841 chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Oh Lord I love this story. I was just wondering when you were going to update last night and now you have and I'm so happy! I'm in tears. As much as I wanted Logan to say yes to the dinner I'm glad he didn't because it will be so much better in the end. This chapter was so great! And now I'm going to go back to watching Richard strangle Straub on ABC Family. Lol.
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