|Reviews for Ode to the Avocado|
| Logans chapter 4 . 6/2/2007
this chapter gets a nice big AW.
| ggfan01 chapter 4 . 6/2/2007
This was amazing! This would have been a great ending for the show! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Vivss chapter 4 . 6/2/2007
Hey great chapter! You write them really well. I liked their talk, both had their points. Wonder what's gonna happen to them now... BTW I think the text formatation is kinda messed here. Update really soon please!
| krazygurl chapter 4 . 6/2/2007
This was a really great chapter. I just hope that it's their way of beginning the trek back to each other and not a way for Logan to say goodbye or to let Rory say goodbye. Anyways, I'm curious what's coming up, so please update soon.
| Vivss chapter 3 . 5/31/2007
Hey great chapter! Ow I'm so excited with this fic! They've finally met again hehe! I wonder how Logan really is... I hope he's not a mess like Rory, he doesn't deserve to be. Does Laura know anything about Rory and Logan? Update soon please!
| Vivss chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
Ow this fic seems so good hehe! I'm curious about Logan, I hope he's fine, happy actually hehe!
| Maggie chapter 3 . 5/30/2007
You are seriously the best L/R writer on the internet. Having spent much of my brief summer break reading L/R stuff on BWR, you are far and away the most talented storyteller for this pairing. Please, please, please, please write more soon; this story is so incredible.
Also, the last paragraph for this chapter? Are you kidding me? Fantastic. Rory's emotion was palpable.
| ggfan01 chapter 3 . 5/29/2007
I love how you are writing this story! I can't wait to read more!
| Butterfly Dreamer chapter 3 . 5/26/2007
I like this. It's angsty..and Rory's not a perfect goody two shoes. I like the first person narrative too. It's done well. Update soon please!
| Krinaia chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
I love the way you wrote their first meeting post-breakup. The tension was so heavy between the characters, I was physically cringing for Rory's sake.
Write more soon!
| iamnotrecluse chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
aw...this chapter was so angst ridden
it made me sad and want to fix it for them
you should fix it for them! but i know u would have no story if u did it now
but please update soon! i like it a lot
| Janey chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Wow, you're good! I mean that, too.
I can't wait for the next chapter, and I like the realistic way you had him not show up at the meeting, and you had her go through the heartwrenching despair. You've created so much suspense.
I hope she fights for him and they end up together (of course), or at the very least, get a proper goodbye in. I will be eagerly anticipating the update.
Again: wow, you're good!
| just hidden chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
"My botched farewell had no embrace, no kiss. His fingers brushed against mine when I held out the ring for him to take. That’s all there was." i know! this is the hardest thing for me to endure about their break up. there was no way she was going to say yes on the show, but in the two episodes with the marriage question there was not a single kiss. that's just wrong. “I can deal with you thinking I’m interesting. For now.” better than dull and repetitive. "The post-college “single life” is everything that Carrie Bradshaw and Paris Gellar had warned me about." what wonderful sources. "Thank God my cerebellum seemed to be functioning, or I would have keeled over from holding my breath." wow, the cerebellum. nice. “Okay. I should go then.” aww. it's not the end. there will be more. great job. can't wait to see when they meet again, and everything in between.
| GEORGEXXX chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
This fic is utterly amazing and realistic!
And I keep hoping that it is rated M because of future chapters. LOL.
| Curley-Q chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Rory and Logan really need to talk!