Reviews for Möbius
Sagethorn chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Hmm, not bad. I definitely liked the overall idea. If I could offer some critique, I'd say you could have added more detail, and maybe tried to make the dialogue a little more natural-sounding. But otherwise, it was pretty good. :3
Rosie Fenwick chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Good Story. you should have made it longer though.
Linneagb chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
:) I liked this
FlavioS chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
The story was kind of interesting, I felt sorry for Forrest and little Forrest and the whole missing graduation thing.

But the end was horrible, and pointless in my opinion.
craziunderurbed999 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Really sad :(
Me chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Hey that was awesome so sad
Camy99 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
...o_O well that's ONE way to end it! Dang. Nicely written though...
G chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
It's a good idea, and your writing is pretty good too.

But it's too short. The story is so compact that it just jumps around and you really don't even feel sad for Forrest Junior in the end, because you don't have the chance to know him.

The dialogue is also a bit static.

But like I said, it's still good, and the idea is really good.
ACCT REMOVED chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Uh...can I say speechless...it was um...interesting I suppose. The way you tied in the Mobius with your point of going back to the beginning was clever I thought :) It moved fast though, over all it was interesting.
FehrPlay chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I thought that was really good, and cleverly thought out. I reckon the ending could've been a little more detailed, as it seemed almost rushed to get the idea of the end out, but otherwise it was great. Excuse my crappy explanation skills there to.
Italian-Rose-xxx chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
That's so sad poor Forrest
2wingo chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Fate can be so cruel.