|Reviews for A Flower in the River|
| mistakenXsilence chapter 2 . 6/16/2007
eh? very confusing indeed. though i hope you can clear this us. the curiousity is killing me!
| Eijei chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
You have great imagination! :D
You're a great writer..
Just be careful of some grammatical errors..
but you can learn it easily..
knowing that you're an intelligent person..hehe..
I like the way you describe the setting..
it gave shivers to my spine! wahaha!
two-thumbs up for you!
looking forward to more of your works! ,
| cheska chapter 2 . 6/6/2007
oh.. that was so scary.. creepy.. even though i'm not really familiar with the series, but yikes! with the story
| winoa13 chapter 2 . 6/4/2007
HeLLo! Hm..reaD uR fiC aNd it was...freaKy*shivers* Hm...That's aLL...
| elven-faerie.aerowin chapter 2 . 6/3/2007
it's tinewen_tokiya here...well the story is great b-but nina's face...it was kinda gross...hehehe...update soon... oh yea this is the first time i saw a story without grammatical errors...well maybe there were but i didn't notice any corrections...
| insouciance18 chapter 2 . 6/2/2007
ok ok i'm getting confused!
the last part and nina kisses nina?
update soon! i like it...
| Jurica chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
O_o.. Extremely Unexpected. I never knew you'd make it like that. But It's Good. :] But Tsujiai wearing Nina's face? :))
I didn't expect him to do that also. :] The chapter 2 is very AWESOME. :)) Continue okay? :D
| IceDollSayaka chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
Oh my... o_O I can't believe what I just read... I'm so heart broken.. :(( wah! Yuta could never do that! No! No! NO! :(( WAH! :( Tsujiai too.. And that flashback.. it was so sad.. just so sad.. TT
Great work, you made me (the reader) sad. Or maybe I was just too involved in the story. Haha Please update soon.. I want to know what happens next. XP
| Jurica chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Update it. XP XP I wanna read the next one! XD
| firetucks chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Nyah~ ...like Sayaka-kun said, very cliff-hanging...what happens next? This has to be continued...; Please? XD
| IceDollSayaka chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Super cliff-hanger.. update! update! :D
I wanna know.. is Ayu dead already? ahaha. Update soon! ;