|Reviews for War Cry|
| Gundum M chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I thought they was going to get married, you do know for something your trying to make a who dun it it's blatantly obvious?
| OddWallow chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Very cute story :)
| KaChan84 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Really enjoyed reading your fic :)
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
| Katt1848 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
haha thats priceless.i would never have expected akane to act like that, seeing as the story only takes place 4 months after the end of the manga. but nontheless it was still funny.
i hadnt gotten the fact that it was ranma that attacked them untill the end.
| Beloved Dawn chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
*blink blink* Oh. My. God.
Does it make me a bad person that I knew it was Ranma and approved? JK
Though I thought it was a rushed wedding they were looking forward to. The love hotel idea was great.
Some very appropriate punishments, to be sure.
Those poor nurses. Having to deal with people THAT crazy until they can be released? Wow.
| mwyeoh chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Quite an interesting story, although I got a bit suspicious when ryoga came on the scene.
Those injuries though! Hilarious! Especially the principal and his pineapples! (Just like Kuno and his watermelons!)
Me sa dont think he wanna use no more of dem pineapple bombs on dem kekki!
Under normal circunstances, I think ranma wouldve had more difficulty with cologne and taro, but an insane, berserk and lusting ranma? That may possibly do it!
| Taechunsa chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
This story just earned a place on my hard drive with my other favorite humorous Ranma stories. I am placing this one right up there with "Burakumin Blues" by D.B. Sommer, "Ranma Dead" by Nicholas Stone, "Something's Fishy Here" by Jack Staik, and "Akane the Suicidal" by WFRose.
Keep up the incredible work. I cannot wait to take a look at your other works.
Who'd have thought Akane could be so frisky! LOL!
| SuperLardBucket chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
HA HA HA! A truly epic conclusion! Bravo!
| Wrin chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Oh. My. God. That was HILARIOUS! MZephyr, you are awesome! I can't stop giggling!
| Eternal Lost Girl chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
The nurse who had been following behind blushed strongly. She stammered, “The doctor's not ... r-ready for him, yet. He said the patient could wait in here. As for what happened ... well ... you see his ... that is ... I never knew ... never realized ...” She paused and took a deep breath. “I wouldn't have believed that a bokken could be shoved so far into ...,” whispering, “... one's nether region.” Turning resolutely to her task, she helped the orderly to make the latest patient as comfortable as was possible under the circumstances.
I remember hearing someone from my math class quoting this... about a year ago. Now I know where this quote came from. The whole thing made me laugh, all of the injuries, and then... THE END! "In fact, I wouldn't let you out of that bed for twenty-four hours."
*Uncontrollable laughter at 10:30 PM, falls out of chair, wakes up baby brother and parents, gets yelled at.*
Luckily, they did not punish me _that_ much...
In three letters: LOL!
| BrazeRancor chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Twenty-Four Hours! Fantastic story, though I agree with the last point. It did make me a tad uncomfortable when I realised it was Ranma...
Still, great fun.
| Zan Li Tendo chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Ok read this AFTEr "Making_War" because someone said they thought that might have been the sequal to this.
Got to the end and sat stunned then laughed so hard that i might have got fired if work wasn't already finished!
So so funny... have to read again in great detail as i missed some of the punishments...
Thought it was ranma from the start but still the end was a surprise.
You know... a sequal to this could be good... maybe the '24 hours'... if you ever decide to do and post that let me know...
please.. please..please.. you MUST... for the sake of us all!
*clears throat*... erm sorry about that.
| Kipcha chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Oh my gosh, that was so naughty and hilarious! Haha! Good job!
| My-name-is-foxglove chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
"Kasumi paused once more to lick her lips, then finished repeating Akane's words. “You wanna know something, Ranma? If I could be sure that everyone would leave us alone, that absolutely no one could cause us any trouble, I'd drag you off to the nearest love hotel. In fact, I wouldn't let you out of that bed for twenty-four hours.”
THE END "
*bursts out laughing and falls of chair* oh-oh-I don't-believe it! *giggles hysterically* twenty-twenty-twenty fou- oh my ribs, my poor ribs! *wipes a tears from eye* oh now that-THAT was a MASTERPIECE! Brilliant!