Reviews for Unblessed
Guest chapter 47 . 10/29/2012
Goodbye, Mary Sue
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2012
MandaPanda1792 chapter 15 . 10/21/2011
I just wanted to say...WHAT AN AWESOME STORY SO FAR! (waving her hands like crazy) that is all (smiles innocently)
ashleyli chapter 47 . 3/21/2011
OMGOMGOMG, why did she have to die? Wow, this story is soo good, I REALLY REALLY hope there is a sequel. Although idk how that would happen without Sachi there. This story is sooo awesome, and great. And as the chapters went on, the spelling mistakes dispersed. I am glad that she killed him and that everything turned out well, but I am just so sad that Sachi had to die...urgh! Oh well, sometimes a story just needs to go like that and happen. Amazing story!
ashleyli chapter 27 . 3/20/2011
That was one of my favourite chapters. I loved it. Haha, she totally just beat up Kikyou! LOL! And the mate part! LOLOLOLOL she should have bulged her eyes out and started laughing like crazy, and tell Sesshomaru this: "No offence, Sesshomaru-sama, but honestly. You aren't that desirable." She paused for a laugh. "However, I accept." And then Inuyasha starts fighting. Boy, haha, clay pot. Loved it.
ashleyli chapter 18 . 3/20/2011
urrggh, it is really bothering me, these spelling mistakes. "Sachi, are you alright; your shivering us getting worse." ? I know it should be "Sachi, are you alright? Your shivering is getting worse." Althought it just kind of bothers me that these chapters aren't edited! And another thing, "Now let's finish this bandaging so you can get some sleep; you'll need it. I'll keep guard, so you can sleep peacefully, K?" Why don't you just say "okay?" or if you really want K? then it is "'kay?". And WHETHER is not spelled "Weather".
ashleyli chapter 11 . 3/19/2011
Loved it. Glad they are friends yet still fight. WOnder what Kouga will think. You also really need to edit these chapters for conventions. Lose, not loose. And the difference between except and ACCEPT is that accpet is like accepting an award or a pencil. Except is like telling the difference about something like how everything about Sachi and Kagome were the same EXCEPT their clothes, hair and eyes.
ashleyli chapter 4 . 3/19/2011
So original...I love it. She is half youkai and half miko. Or perhaps youkai and miko. What will the group make of this? What will Sesshomaru's reaction be...? I will have to find out, this story is truly amazing. However I did find two spelling mistakes again, hehe. When Inuyasha said "That b**** is insulting me name!" it is my I presume. And another time when Sachi's flute turned back into a flute in the end. Other than that, I absolutely love it. Please, I beg you, to make a sequel.
ashleyli chapter 3 . 3/19/2011
Wow. I really like the story line. Seriously. I hope to read more as soon as I can, it is quite hard to find a good Inuyasha story. And I kind of aim for the Inu/OC ones XD But anyway, everything is good except that I spotted a few spelling mistakes. Is this story complete?
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 47 . 1/12/2011
i love it! can't wait for more!
XxDark-maiden201xX chapter 47 . 6/15/2010
.god. I am absolutely in love with this story...the last chapter was so bittersweet! Please consider writing a sequel! D

AutumnAnn333 chapter 47 . 8/10/2009
Oh my god, I am so depressed. I don't want it to end! Ugh. Anyways that WAS the best ending ever. Really. Man, you know you should write and publish your own book. For real. But are you planning on making a sequel? I'm pretty sure you aren't, but there is hope right? Who am I kidding? There is no hope. You aren't making a sequel. I think I am going to print this whole story out and bind it. It was really amazing. You have the perfect mix of comedy, action, romance, tragedy, suspense etc etc. We all know I could be prasing you like a God all day, but the reality is that I have to go find some Kleenex... haha. After that I'm gonna read the rest of your fanfics.
electrogirl88 chapter 46 . 8/5/2009
Just when I was getting into it there is a cliffhanger. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter! I thought that you did a good job. You're also doing well at keeping everyone's personalities right, which I like. Great job, and great story. Can't wait for your next update!
AutumnAnn chapter 46 . 7/30/2009
Ah! Make the next one!

I don't know how long I can wait!
AutumnAnn chapter 41 . 7/2/2009
Oh. I really liked this one, I don't know why I like tragedies so damn much.. but I do. Haha, what a bitch I am. Don't you worry I didn't even come close to shedding a tear this time. Hm I wonder what Sachi and Inuyasha's personal hell is going to be like... Well gotta read on. Till next time!

Love you fan,

AutumnAnn. :]
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