|Reviews for The Necklace|
| Reincarnated chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
How new ~ thrilling ~ *chokes*
I usually have a hard time reading stories that jump around like this, because I feel like the author is skipping around which, I guess is true. Anyway, I always read the first line ~ and I've read a lot of first lines in the time I've been a member of this site.
I never had a favorite before ~ :)
So basically, Iroh knows who Katara is...because he indirectly killed her Grandmother and Mother. That's neat on a million levels. He had always thought is was the snow the brought shivers to his spine...*ponders*
You do very well in helping your readers connect with the story.I could actually hear the wind as the snow fell...and you didnt' say anything about wind. I loved how Iroh showed compassion in his past, instead of making him some heartless killer back then.
| razzledazzle41191 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Really great, I love how Iroh's seen the necklace through three generations. Very clever!
| Dragon Jadefire chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
| Juicyy chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
brought tears to my eyes
| Kyoshi7989 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
| Wohitzi chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
I really like this. I can sorta picture it happen, especially since I've always wondered if someone from Zuko's family had killed Katara's mother.
| Blooappall chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
How DARE you say you can't write!
That was FANTASTIC! A really interesting take on Iroh's psyche, which I loved!
| HeartofFire-SoulofWater chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
That was deep, man. Deep.
Peace and love, my friend! *strums on guitar*
Okay, okay, JK! But seriously-that was good! I like that it's from Iroh's point of view. Keep writing!
| toonfan820 chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
wow time through the eyes of iroh (and the necklace)...deep, and really nice!
| uffda1nat chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
interesting prospective, very creative. Keep writing!