|Reviews for As It Fell Apart|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Aww.. Bittersweet. Onii-San to the rescue
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/12/2015
Yay! Lavi's finally figured out that he's Allen's older brother!
| Enemotou chapter 6 . 11/22/2014
I totally love this. Continue please?
| wellp chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
| LilMonsterHuman69 chapter 6 . 4/5/2014
PLEASE continue! I love it!
| Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 6 . 12/18/2013
This is a really cool fic
| GreenEyedPixie chapter 6 . 8/16/2013
It's been a while since the last update so would I be right in guessing it would be wishful thinking for another chapter? I really like this fic, it's definitely one of the best fem!Allen stories I've read :) I'm pretty certain you spelt Warwick castle wrong (if you mean the castle in London that's quite a big tourist attraction) but other than that I didn't notice any other mistakes
| TeddyBearStuffings chapter 6 . 6/27/2013
I really absolutely LOVE the plot of this story!
though you really left me on a cliffhanger there with Lavi though...
im gonna take a wild guess and guess that lavi is charles lol
anywayz i hope you continue this story soon!
| Nightmare-chan chapter 6 . 11/13/2012
MORE PLEASE T•T I love FEMallen
| Nightmare- chan chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I love your story it's so awsome.
| NamikazeMia chapter 6 . 10/3/2012
please update soon,, it would be cool to see allen giving her birth parents the finger!hihihi
by the way why, in a few chp before, was kanda disgusted with the thought of allen in a skirt i didnt ge it is she ugly or just weird?
| Amethyst-thief chapter 6 . 8/15/2012
Please write more. It's good.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/4/2012
MORE I WANT MORE! SO INTERESTING THIS STORY IS! I WANT MORE YULLEN *BOWS DOWN* PLEASE!
(MY CAPS LOCK IS ACTING UP SO PLZ EXCUSE ALL THE CAPITALIZATION. GOMEN.)
| Oz the Magician chapter 6 . 1/30/2012
this story is awesome!
| Kumika95 chapter 6 . 12/20/2011
I've got to say that this seems to be a good story, a bit flawed with a detail or a little sketchy, but it is still a well written story. But are you discontinuing this story? I'd hate to read this story and NEVER know the end. I just do not care for cliffy endings. So will you PLEASE finish your WONDERFUL story? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! But make the next chapter LONG and INFORMATIVE