|Reviews for Forever is a long time|
| wardlyman chapter 22 . 3/20
I'm adding you to the most shittiest writer community. I was skeptical when the guy told me there was such an ridiculously bad story, but here we are.
Edward kissed another girl, bella runs off to be with another guy. Edward isn't allowed a thought unless it's benefits noleen's(this female character is in no way, shape or form Bella) way of options is change his moral code or be gone, Edward isn't allowed yo be angry. Etc.
If you read reviews before reading a fic. Don't read this fic unless you have the mind of a 14 year old.
| wardlyman chapter 17 . 3/20
So let me get this straight, edward kissed another girl but it's ok for bella to fuck another guy? Right.
| RonnieOrion chapter 32 . 7/29/2011
Amazingly written. Couldn't have done better. Brava.
| Nemesis of Bellin chapter 32 . 3/8/2011
at least a story where bella,noleen is a strong vampire! i love the action! gongratulations!
| lynettecullen chapter 31 . 8/4/2010
I like how it turned out.
| lynettecullen chapter 30 . 8/4/2010
Damn, I wasn't planning on crying.
I liked it a lot though.
| lynettecullen chapter 29 . 8/4/2010
She's kicking ass!
| lynettecullen chapter 28 . 8/4/2010
That seemed easy.
| lynettecullen chapter 27 . 8/4/2010
I like how Bella leads.
| lynettecullen chapter 26 . 8/4/2010
Well, I'm glad that he isn't pissed off.
| lynettecullen chapter 25 . 8/4/2010
I like the note thing.
| lynettecullen chapter 24 . 8/4/2010
I'm glad that she didn't kill her.
| lynettecullen chapter 23 . 8/3/2010
Damn it, it's always Edward.
| lynettecullen chapter 22 . 8/3/2010
Well damn, I just know that's she's gonna pick the one that I don't like.
| lynettecullen chapter 21 . 8/3/2010
She representing that V!