Reviews for Sharps & Flats
Ava-Potter gal chapter 15 . 11/16/2015
That was so good!
RewriteThisStory chapter 12 . 8/6/2013
YAY! Great job.
Jack finally got his head on straight (I hope...)
RewriteThisStory chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
Ugh- noon kickoff- it sucks being the only people awake on campus and functioning at 8:00am.

Best. ending. ever. :D
RewriteThisStory chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Clarification for the last review... I expected Jack's proclamation- just not so soon (though I suppose 7 chapters isn't that 'soon'...)- or in that way.

...for a second David saw it in his eyes - the truth, the aching truth.- Gah- right in the gut. Amazing.

Ok- the end note made me laugh- they're doing it to themselves... that's great. I do like angst though- and their arguments/ moments are hot- so all is forgiven :)
RewriteThisStory chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
Aww, crushes on the guy standing 2 steps away... hazards of being a girl in the trumpet section. :) (And Jack is SUCH a trumpet- perfect.)

Yay for Mush! Way to go get it! :D
"You can't honestly tell me you're sorry you got to make out with me."- This line. I spit my drink. That's got to be one of the most cocky things someone could have ever said. LOVE IT!

Wow- appropriate chapter title. Didn't expect that. Well done.
RewriteThisStory chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
I was hoping for a vague mention of their band leader's resemblance to the president- or would that have been too heavy handed? ;)
RewriteThisStory chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
Even Dutchy's blond hair managed to look guilty.- this may be one of the funniest mental images I've ever had.

OMG- dirty drill pictures. I love it- SO MANY MEMORIES!
RewriteThisStory chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
More Guard jokes! I love it!
Sigh. I miss the parade in- but then my university was a BIG football school and it was electric for big games.

Aww, what a sweet chapter- ok- maybe sweet is the wrong word- but I loved it! :D Yay Mush and Blink! I wasn't sure how much I'd like the Blink chapters- most of what I read is soley Jack/Davey- but I'm loving these just as much. :)
RewriteThisStory chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
Oh good. Inside after lunch. :)

Loved this chapter too. So many memories. :) I can't stop smiling.
Was there really so much gay bullying in your band or is it more for the dramatic effect of the story? Most people that I knew were fine about it or just shrugged it off- if they had things to say, they kept them to themselves for the most part.

Can't wait to read more!
RewriteThisStory chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
As a fellow former band geek and trumpet player I already love it- and that David and Jack are trumpet players- well all's the better. :)
It feels like home to read an almost mirror of my first day of college band. (Never had to march in a parking lot though- well once for bowl game practices- not fun. But your description of the early morning dew was just spot on. I hope you weren't really forced into the after lunch outside rehearsal- yikes- we always had indoor music/sectional rehearsal then- outside morning and evening. But I'm down south and it's HOT!)

A little sad that Mush is a clarinet... I like Spot and Race as drummers.

And I like that you explained all the lingo for the non- band folks- very deftly done.
cassy1994 chapter 15 . 6/26/2011
ok I know you finished this story for ever ago, but I just finished reading it. I started reading it at about 11:30pm and could not stop reading it til I finished! It was really good, different time period and different angles on the group but it seemed to really work! I liked this story,perfect interuption to sleep. Oh it took about five and a half hours to read and I didn't want to stop reading, I really didn't!
piklejuice chapter 15 . 2/10/2011
I died. You killed me. So much love for this story. Also, I hate homophobes like I hate Nazis. Ugh. This was beautiful and glorious and I loved the religious aspect; just because you're a believer doesn't mean you have to hate gay people. Who are often adorable. Especially David. Seriously, I just want to stick him in my pocket and take him out when I get sad. XD
captivatedbythesky chapter 15 . 3/14/2010
Ah! Cym, I'm sorry this took me forever and a day to review. I decided to go back and reread the entire thing. And then I was also rereading other things and betaing and writing and having a life.

But, AH! Oh, how I love it.

Blink... This is definitely one of the best written Blinks in existence. He's wonderful. I love how touched he is at the paper.

David as EIC is great. And oh the punniness. And I really enjoy Sarah. She's actually cannon, but you know... interesting. Kristy is one of my favorite OC's ever. I actually don't know why, but I can really understand David having a female friend like that.

Then *squees uncontrollably* the ENDING! I want more. I love Jack. I love his teasing.

Rustie73 chapter 15 . 2/17/2010
This review is late in coming. Please forgive me that.

This story was a joy from beginning to end; a virtual rollercoaster of emotion, and I’m glad I was along for the ride.
KichigaiKairu chapter 15 . 2/2/2010
Two things:



Oh man, this was one of the best stories in existence. One of the greatest AUs EVAR. And I was kind of surprised that Spot and Race didn't get together...I was totally expecting them to. (plus, it's my otp)

Great job, overall. The ending was sweet. :D
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