Reviews for Ones Journey
mnementh2000 chapter 1 . 8/20
Wow! Quite a... tear-jerker! Not saying that it isn't good, mind, but very sad, and yet beautiful at the same time.
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/31
that was good keep the chapters coming
uzumaki bruto chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
This was awesome and depressing at the same time.
kika04 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
It was sad but good
Okazaki323 chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
that was good. but also depressing.
hime usagi chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
*sniff* that was beautiful im crying! *sniff* nice job! *sniff boohoo*
SmiffyHallo chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Wow... the end was kinda happy Yet Sad too...
Hzleys87 chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
This was really Beautiful, it was so bittersweet. I loved it.
Fences chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
made me cry
dragonwarlord chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Good story that is the way I see naruto going in those circumstances had a hint of gladiator at the end. I feel so SAD for naruto!
Major Hinata Fan chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
This was good to. A sad ending..I think.

Really enjoyed this.
ani chapter 1 . 9/15/2007

i really don't know what to say... this is so... wow. loosing hinata and their daughter... no wonder he wanted to go.
Purple Kunoichi chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
You are my new favorite author. I am putting you and this story on my favorites list!
braindamage730 chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
that waz a sad but good ass story reminds me of gladiator the ending were he see his family waiting for him good story !
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