| Reviews for Morphic |
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  Eliot chapter 8 . 8/16 No comment. |
| Eliot chapter 7 . 8/16 Ugh a headache hurts like nothing else in the universe, especially a migraine. Those things are literally big chunks of hell in your forehead. And Gabriel, oof. Even though he’s a fictional character, I feel so awful for him. I mean, having two parents and one being shot is one thing, because you’ve still got the other one, but he doesn’t have another parent. At least he can take care of himself. |
| Eliot chapter 6 . 8/16 Gonna skip this review thank you very much! |
| Eliot chapter 5 . 8/16 I don’t have any comments for this chapter so I’m using this review to ask you to please read my reviews, accept them, and please do not text me if you somehow get my contact information. |
| Eliot chapter 4 . 8/16 Okay just so you know I kind of skimmed over this chapter due to it being half Christian and I’m an atheist and also because of the warning at the start. So… I may not have any idea what’s going on in following chapters, but I do know that I don’t want Dave to die. |
| Eliot chapter 3 . 8/16 Awwwww the ending was really sweet. That’s all I have to say, except I stand corrected. we did not see them start raising the morphs in this chapter. |
| Eliot chapter 2 . 8/16 Well, there was less swearing, so that’s a plus. This one was actually a bit boring. At least we get to see them raising the morphs now. |
| Eliot chapter 1 . 8/16 I have no words. It started out kind of, well, how do I say this, awful? And there probably could be a bit less swearing, but I expect the other chapters to be a bit better. I think. I hope. |
| J chapter 14 . 7/7/2023 Well DAM! that was depressing, this story was a solid concept and decent in execution, I think if the characters were given more time to grow and mature as people than it would be even better. Frankly a sequel (hopefully one with a less downer ending) is a must, it'd be nice to see more of these characters, and hopefully they can have a happy ending somehow. For what it was this fic was pretty good, and I encourage you to keep writing and keep improving! |
| J chapter 13 . 7/6/2023 Well THAT could've gone better. |
| J chapter 12 . 7/6/2023 Is it just me, or is it kinda funny that in this POKEMON fanfic, weave only technically seen like TWO Pokemon? not a problem just though it was funny. |
| J chapter 11 . 7/6/2023 Not to sound repetitive, but, THAT escalated quickly! |
| J chapter 10 . 7/6/2023 I,ll sat, these kids are getting more interesting, hope that continues. |
| J chapter 8 . 7/6/2023 Can't tell if this is dark or over the top yet... still pretty fun though. |
| J chapter 4 . 7/6/2023 Well THAT escalated quickly! |