Reviews for Mokuba is Missing
Cartlin chapter 5 . 11/3/2009
LOL, your story's so cute! You're like 13, right? That's my estimate based on your writing style. My favorite part, is where you used the term anus repeatedly, because you thought using a proper term, would make the scene seem more adult like.

In all honesty, I recommend getting a beta, especially if you're writing torture scenes and rape scenes. Good luck.
catsblood15 chapter 15 . 7/2/2007
WA so beautiful!
Joice a.k.a. Europa chapter 17 . 6/17/2007
I think this is a nice story. _ I like it very much.
loverskeeper chapter 17 . 5/27/2007
i loved how this fic ended, joey and seto getting married and joey finally healing and his family being found, thanks for writing this fic.
dragonlady222 chapter 17 . 5/27/2007
Such a sweet ending. Good job!
dragonlady222 chapter 16 . 5/27/2007
Good chapter. I love it.
dragonlady222 chapter 15 . 5/27/2007
Good chapter. Seto and Joey are going to be just fine.
dragonlady222 chapter 14 . 5/26/2007
Good chapter. Seto is great, he publicly proposed!
dragonlady222 chapter 13 . 5/26/2007
Good chapter. I'm glad his mom gave him hope that things will get better for him and Seto.
dragonlady222 chapter 12 . 5/26/2007
Good chapter. A Happy Reunion. I hope they will be happy together.
dragonlady222 chapter 11 . 5/26/2007
Good chapter. I'm glad they found his whole family. I can't wait for the reunion.
dragonlady222 chapter 10 . 5/25/2007
I hope they can convince them. Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 9 . 5/25/2007
Good chapter. Joey and Mokuba are getting along really well and so is Set.
BrightestStarInTheNightSky chapter 8 . 5/25/2007
gtood chapter can't wait for you to update
BrightestStarInTheNightSky chapter 7 . 5/25/2007
joey's home! good chapter
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