|Reviews for Eternal Twilight|
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 16 . 11/12/2010
good story update soon
| 123456789DELETED chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Great so far!
| Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 16 . 11/24/2008
Now what? Please tell me she's not going to get in more trouble with, I don't know, the wolves or maybe even the Volturi. I think things are bad enough already. Still, I really hope you'll update soon, it's been nearly a year since the last time you did, but I have hope.
| alpacacat0401 chapter 16 . 9/23/2008
wow that was good :)
u should add more drama
like...competition once they get 2 the new school
and tanya 4 edward and some other kid 4 bella
and what about jacob?
good story tho i rlly like it :)
| Anima Bella chapter 16 . 9/17/2008
This chapter and chapter 15 are great! I hope you can update sometime soon
| Anima Bella chapter 15 . 9/17/2008
Amazing story so far! I'll finish reading through chapter 16 later today :D
| SilverTwilight1810 chapter 16 . 4/9/2008
Aww! That was a horrible spot to end it on! I wanna read more! I loved the end of this chapter, it was so sad. I think you would make a wonderful author one day, sorry, a little random, but you have a lot of talent!
| BE4ever chapter 16 . 1/21/2008
| BE4ever chapter 16 . 1/18/2008
I want to hug you and kick you at the same time! I'm a very impatient person and I love this fanfic! Please post!
| The Princess Wolf chapter 16 . 1/18/2008
i loved this chapter
especially mike's thoughts.
| Jexena chapter 16 . 1/12/2008
She really is stronger and breaver than she gives herself credit for. If it had been me I would have stayed at the house while they had the funeral. I would not have been able to sit through that torture. If anything I would have opted to go to Denali to stay meet te Denali crew. That way I wouldn't even be in the same state. I am just glad that Edward was able to find her o easily. Not that I really thought he wouldn't be able to.
| Jexena chapter 15 . 1/12/2008
I love weeping willows. I want to find a house one day that has a weepng willow in the backyard so that I will have a place to sit when I need alone time. It will be my secret space. That was so sweet tht he came to her immediately when he noticed that sheneeded him. The fact that he didn't flounder and try to give her more time to chea herself up. That he didn't try to wait some tme to try to save face about needing her just as mch. Their love is really so dependant on the others presance at all times. A fact that I do not think they completely understand at the moment. Bu I have faith that they will figure it out in little time.
| Jexena chapter 14 . 1/12/2008
You know, I never want to know what she would do without Alice. She is so vital to this family. THey are just as lucky that Alice found tham as they are that Bella did. I do like her power. It is something that I have been playing with too. I loved Emmett's surpise attak on Jasper. That was so true to form.
| Jexena chapter 13 . 1/12/2008
I really hope that once he does change her in the books that he doesn't actually think that she will come out of that thre days of hell and decide that it was all for nothing. The really has little faith in her love for him everytime he thinks things like that. She gave up her entire life, family, future for her love of him. How could he possibly think that once she is finally a vampire that she will no longer love him. Silly, silly vmapire.
| Jexena chapter 12 . 1/12/2008
I am glad that they were able to pull it off. I was worried for a moment there. Bella really is a bad actress. I feel bad for Charlie and Renee. But they couldn't keep her forever, even though the Cullens can. She wll be taken care of forever.