|Reviews for T Minus|
| alphabetagemini400 chapter 5 . 8/6/2009
good story. like how you spread out the points of view and prepare the reader for the next story
| Taeniaea chapter 13 . 6/22/2007
| ancient lantean chapter 9 . 6/16/2007
It seems that you have read Halo: The Fall of Reach a few times. Very well-made scenario for the Spartan-II of the SW universe.
| Vila Restal chapter 13 . 6/12/2007
Can't wait to read more of this. Please keep this going.
| rimera chapter 13 . 6/12/2007
hehehe... I like her... She reminds me of a giant destructive hurricane, an amazing sight to behold, but you really don't want to be anywhere around it.
| Theredking87 chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Ok, First thing is first, I really like your stories, and this is not a flame. Very Inventive, very good ideas and I think the Changes you've made work, and create a harrowing storyline, but I do have some Issues.
1. Spell check. It's very useful and makes things alot easier on the reader. Also, watch your tenses and your punctuation.
2. Copying of other's works. If your going to copy ANY work of someone elses, please give them credit, it's their work, not yours and they deserve the credit for writing it.
3. Facts. Star Wars fans can be almost as ruthless as trekkies(no disrespect intended.) Check your facts before writing anything (Ex. Kenyan Farlander was born on Agamar, not Adumar.) There is actually a very nice site that will give you all the info on anything to do with the Star Wars universe. It's called Wookiepedia and can be accessed by Entering
Sorry, Don't mean to Knitpick, but Critism usually helps. Looking forward to The Empire Strikes as reinvented by you.
| kiku65 chapter 13 . 6/9/2007
Good to see Chi is having some fun... :)
| rimera chapter 12 . 6/5/2007
Alright, yeah, this makes more sense. "Do not underestimate the powers of the Emperor," Yoda said. THIS is much, much scarier than Force Lightning.
| rimera chapter 11 . 6/5/2007
I'm sure you've already thought of this, but... just don't forget to elaborate on Luke and Leia's relationship. They are twins, after all... and their closeness in the original Star Wars was part of what made the movie so great. Also, it may make Luke Organa a little more personable.
| rimera chapter 10 . 6/5/2007
Damn... for a second, I thought that was Leia...
| rimera chapter 9 . 6/5/2007
Wow... now, that's a fight scene! Huzzah, we have an action story writer, people! This can't help but be good...
| kiku65 chapter 12 . 6/5/2007
To quote and old man from a long time ago...
"Nice…nice…nice…nice…Should we next find some insects to pull the legs off? Sounds fun doesn't it?"
| miarath chapter 11 . 6/4/2007
Oh, this is going to be better and better.
Hope this goes on:-)
| kiku65 chapter 11 . 6/4/2007
Nice, Etain and Olee are back! As well as various others...
Only minor glitch is that folk down in the ol' GFFA speak Badic, not english. And Wookiee is spelt with two 'e's, but no-one remembers that so I'll let you off :P
| kiku65 chapter 10 . 6/4/2007
Hey! You nicked Halmere! :P
Ailyn certainly takes after her father, doesn't she? There must be something in the genes...