Reviews for Pursuit
Guest chapter 2 . 5/10
Love how Don protected Charlie. Great story, thank you for writing this
Lady Asphodelic chapter 2 . 3/11
Magnificent. The chase. Don being the awesome fbi agent and big brother ever. Charlie being the awesome math professor and little brother ever. Alan being the best dad of both sons ever. And I'm glad Michael thought things through, and the situation handled. I'm glad too that there no hard-feelings between and Gilden. I love this. Great job! I appreciate you writing this!
Lady Asphodelic chapter 1 . 3/11
Can't believe you don't have a lot of reviews for this chapter in specifically and this story in general! I don't understand! This is incredible! I'm never disappointed with your stories! Awesome! Amazing job!
Cutter12 chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
Don was so COOL in this story. In fact, all of the characters were written really well. From Don, so calm and controlled, to Charlie's frenetic energy, to poor Michael who was at first so scared and desperate, then excited and then to the dawning realization of what exactly he did and now what was going to happen next. Great job; I enjoyed reading this very much. :)
KayValo87 chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
I love love LOVE this story! Seriously, I was gripping onto my laptop the whole time.

My very favorite part was the confrontation near the end.

"What badge? He's a math professor, he doesn't have a badge."

"Yes I do ... And I outrank you Don."

LOL! You gotta love brothers.
Potterworm chapter 2 . 5/10/2009
As one of the first numb3rs fics I've ever read, I really enjoyed this. It was fast-paced and in-character for them. Great job.
Kiki Cabou chapter 2 . 8/11/2007
Marvelous. :) I really enjoyed this. It was fast-paced and exciting, and all the action came off very clearly. Enjoyed the last bit with Alan too. "It had been a dangerous situation involving his sons, not some television show." Um, Alan, I hate to break this to you, but ... LOL

Seriously, it was very cool. Everything rang true. I especially liked all the little radio details and the law-enforcement chatter. Stuck out my tongue at the annoying, sickeningly breathless news people. Don was awesome, Charlie was equally awesome, and it had a happy ending! Hooray! Great job. :D
Synbou chapter 2 . 7/22/2007
That was a very good story. I loved the concept. I enjoyed the action. It well done.

Great work!

DreamBrother chapter 1 . 6/2/2007

Just wanted to say, you spelled out Don's and Charlie's name in binary code didn't you, for dividers in POV?

Lol, nice thinking!

Really like the way you've written this. It's fast paced without being rushed, the descriptions arent too over-flowy, everything works in conjuntion with each other. Great job!
Suisan chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
An excellant story! Well-written and realistically so. (I say that as a former Emergency Telecommunicator.) I just wish all pursuits ended so well.
Taura Callisto chapter 2 . 5/27/2007
Very nicely done!
PattyB chapter 2 . 5/26/2007
Excellent storyline that I thoroughly enjoyed. I was really expecting a more angsty ending but hey, you're the writer.

Thanks! Great job.
ladc chapter 2 . 5/25/2007
Loved it. Tense. Suspenceful, but with very little in the way of violence. It also reminded me of my days living in LA.
rower4life chapter 2 . 5/24/2007
Excellent job. Loved the story.
The Silent Rumble chapter 2 . 5/24/2007
looks good! cant w8 for more stories by you
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