|Reviews for Forget Me Not|
| DianaThen chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
You wrote a number of the later chapters? AND WE DIDN'T GET TO SEE THEM?
This is so good... I want to know what happens... I feel cheated.
In regards to who it is, I want it to be Danny, so that's just what i'm picturing (even if I shouldn't).
Update even though it's been... just over five years...
| Biisaiyowaq chapter 3 . 4/7/2010
You HAVE to continue this!
| Jessica01 chapter 3 . 9/12/2008
| Thunderstorm101 chapter 3 . 9/8/2008
Huh. Actually, I think that he's probably the MOST POWERFUL one they've collected...it's just that none of them know it. Heh...if he didn't have amnesia, Danny would've been able to tear that place to pieces. Ghost-proof walls aren't half so effective if they're frozen solid before being hit with a good, strong ecto-blast...
Not that anyone will know that he can do those things. The only powers he ever really looses control of, the only ones that are TRUELY instinctive, are intangablility and invisibility. In the show, his first ectoblast is fired from sheer panic, and when he tries to duplicate it, he reverts to human form. In the epsiode where he has amnesia ala Desiree, the only place he can fire them from is his butt.
Odds are that he has subconcious barriers keeping his more dangerous powers in check (ecto-blasts, cryokinesis, and especially the Ghostly Wail), so it's a slim chance (the way I see it) that anyone will find out about them before his memories start to come back (and it SHOULD be possible to bring them back somehow).
I hope I helped you with this somewhat.
| Thunderstorm101 chapter 2 . 11/29/2007
Nothing is what it seems indeed...my first thought is that the speaker is Danny...but wouldn't his parents have made a missing persons thing on him very easy to find?
Black hair, male, North American. His skin color is not mentioned, so I suppose it could be Tucker if you really wanted to throw us all for a loop. Or even Kwan; he has black hair.
No, it's obviously Danny. I says right at the top of the page... "main character: Danny F."
| Cordria chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
So I'm still trying desperately to figure out this story. I've decided most of my pet theories are out the window with this chapter... and your clues ARE leading up to some sort of Ghost-Boy... but I still keep with the theory that the ages and the dates do not line up like they need to for this 'Will' character to BE Danny.
So... I'm going to guess some OTHER kind of spectral creature? Maybe... OH! Maybe he's a GHOST that's forgotten! Or given his life back! Or... is it a ghost we know? Does he just not KNOW he's a ghost? Or... SO MANY IDEAS! Maybe he's a ghost POSSESSING a human - and maybe he just doesn't know he's doing it? Or... a clone could still work, I suppose. A clone with ghost powers...
Maybe he's VLAD'S clone (as in a clone of Vlad)... Oh, that'd be funny! Always wondered why he hadn't cloned himself...
So - I'm just assuming the people that have this Will character ARE the GIW at this point. That kind of sounds like them with the repeating of the words and stuff, and the room sounds very government-ish. Could be wrong, but that's what I'm liking to think. Some sort of government lab or something.
Maybe they are CREATING ghosts? oo...
I'm going to stop with the random theories now. UPDATE! I need to know how far off the wall I am!
| Nylah chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
Well, you've definitely made me curious... 'cause if everything isn't as it seems you have me confused because to me it all seems clear so I'm probably way off track here :)
| anonymous chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Keep up the good work. I'd like to see the next chapter ASAP. I have a question, what is Will's life like?
| Jessica01 chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Where do Danny and the others come in?
| brightlily chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
is this danny phantom related?
| Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
This looks good so far; interesting plot apparent even in this first part. I can't wait to see where it leads, from what I can see you look like a fantastic writer.
| Cordria chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
So... who is this William? I was originally assuming Danny... but then I read your author's notes and started to get a Tucker vibe.
And then... oddly... I looked back up at the date 2009. And the age: 15. Niether of them adds up to a canon character. So... ON TO THE THEORIES! (strange ones too, this time) :D
Could be another of Vlad's clones. Could be one of Danny's cousins. Could be one of Tucker's cousins (I like this one. :P) Could be some random OC in need of rescuing... Is Danny/Tucker/Dash/Kwan whatever in this place too? That'd be wierd.
OOH! Maybe it's a GIW lock-up area for people that have figured out DP's secret... but now THAT depends on whether or not this is post-Phantom Planet. Maybe it's a creepy, litle place for people with creepy, little powers... *snicker*
I'd love for this to be Tucker, but I'm afraid the dates don't line up... so I'm just going to have to wait and cross my fingers that this isn't another silly 'OC gets rescued against all odds' story, and instead has some kind of interesting, unique twist. :)
| Kin Pandun chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
What happened to him? What did they all escape from? Experimentors?
Thanks for writing,