Reviews for The Darkness in Kage Bunshin
Lostvayne chapter 1 . 5/20
*cue one of the unlimited blade works chants*

this fic had value only for the awe and the build up to the conclusion. Dialogue is average and it's hard to say any of the characters had personality, with Orochimaru being the oddball for his reaction to realizing that Naruto had destroyed Kiri. Wouldn't expect the human experimenter to be shocked over a mass murder.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
Well... Fuck.
Dazzle chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
This is awesome. Cheers.
pikachucat chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
SearingFireBlaze chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Your premise for writing this is stupid. It doesn't matter whether you "buy it" or not. It was put up as fact and who are you to dispute it? Are you one of the creators of the idea? No? Than your opinion doesn't matter in this. There doesn't need to be any other reason than what's already been stated as fact. You're basically using your inane thoughts as a reason to write something that holds no truth nor is any good. And of course, it's "kinda angsty and graphic". Pathetic. What a waste of time and space.
lord Martiya chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
This was one scary story... Truly a scary one.
whao chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
you have made a VERY good creepy pasta here if you want to call it that.
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
i dont get it...
Aoi Shinkaze chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
One thing, considering his pretty sick and twisted portrayal, Orochimaru would probably be the LAST person to berate Naruto on the matter of having a conscience. Also, Sasuke is pretty cold-blooded too, he doesn't care about innocent people, so long as he can kill Itachi.
Tatsu-ZZmage chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Wow so dark. BTW your mentioned in the tvtrops for "I AM LEGION"
Lewis The King chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Dosen't disapoint in darkness, well writen and that's all there is to say, good work.
TemariArisaka chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
...Wow. That was amazing.
The Masked Idiot chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
sorry, my brains muddled, so does that mean the clones were extremly durable clones?
Edainwen chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
shit this is truly creepy... i always find so bad that in fight all this persons (narutos) dies but i have never thought in such a deep way about what this could make to his mind TTTT so sad
1000Nachts chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
That was awesome. And terrifying. I think they're related. It feels very real and and raw. Emphasis on realistic. After being able to experience such terrible acts, and related deaths on the level of someone who spams thousands of these regularly, trauma would be inevitable.
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