Reviews for the story of us
finding chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
When she was seven she took ballroom dancing lessons for a year, fell in love with her instructor and wrote love letters she never sent.

She never danced with her father, he was always too busy or away. Though she once dragged a stranger from his self-imposed exile and made him dance beneath the stars.

*A* Just... *A* Your writing style is too pretty.
Emerald-Latias chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
That was so amusing and light-hearted that I simply adored it. Especially the stylistic way of your writing. The numbered and titled sub-sections were very poignant and meaningful in a way I can't quite describe. You don't come across that kind of thing often and I enjoyed the originality of it all.

Keep on writing,

Celestial Rage chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Wonderful, just wonderful.

Keep up the good work!
Fusiko chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
This was just so touching. Your writing has so much feel to it. I loved it. Keep up the good work!
Selphie Ivy chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Nice one shot! You put a lot of detail into your writing! x