|Reviews for Helpless When She Smiles|
| deathwish chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
very good even though there are 70 chapters still wish you kept going
| Guest chapter 56 . 7/31/2014
ermm...the story is sweet but...it definitely should not be classified as K. It should be rated M. There are children reading on this site...but yes, sweet story so far. :)
| Anonymous chapter 41 . 5/14/2013
I think his name is Derek Christopher Sheperd. Not Michael.
| CileSuns92 chapter 70 . 3/27/2013
I loved this. I loved how Meredith rambled all the way through it and managed to still be strong and supportive of Derek when he needed her. I loved Derek, being his McDreamy self for most of the chapters. I loved Markie's input in this. Seriously, what's not to like in this story?
It was a really pleasant reading, you put things in the open that Shonda barely grazed over the surface, you had Mer meet the family and get accepted, you had Derek forgive Mark, with words and not just actions. Heck, they promised forever right away, it was palpable, not something I kept wondering if it was going to happen or not.
There were drama and heartache, but it was believable, totally believable. So thank you, for trying to give us a different perspective on what could have happened. Thank you for posting.
| smashing1900 chapter 70 . 3/11/2012
I loved your whole fic. I loved how they grew and learned to talk and communicate.
| smashing1900 chapter 59 . 3/11/2012
I'm glad that Kath and Sam are so welcoming
| smashing1900 chapter 48 . 3/11/2012
I loved that Meredith offered to come with Derek when his mom had the heart attack
| smashing1900 chapter 44 . 3/11/2012
I'm glad they talked about Addison and how Derek felt about trying
| smashing1900 chapter 40 . 3/10/2012
I'm glad she went directly to Derek to tell him about her dad
| smashing1900 chapter 35 . 3/10/2012
LOL for Mark waiting for them in front on the supply closet
| smashing1900 chapter 33 . 3/10/2012
That's something she should have told her friends a long while ago. They kept barging in her bedroom
| smashing1900 chapter 26 . 3/10/2012
Why didn't they talk about the chief think and the drowning on the show?
| smashing1900 chapter 24 . 3/10/2012
Loved their second date
| smashing1900 chapter 22 . 3/9/2012
I thought she would freak out, but was positively surprised when she said she loved him.
| smashing1900 chapter 20 . 3/9/2012
I loved that she asked him to stay in her bed