|Reviews for Forging the Sword|
| NympheaLotus chapter 13 . 3/4
It's a nice story. It's quite different from what I've read before.
I have a question: Does Hermione still have the timeturner. I suppose she does, but you didn't mention it.
| The Dawn chapter 13 . 3/3
Wheee, what a ride this story is! I want more! I want more! :D
| iSaint chapter 13 . 2/25
That is good!
Everything, but I am also totally blown away by the Niffler club. Fuck that is awesome
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST IT IS SO GOOD.
Please keep writing?
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 13 . 2/25
Ooooohhhh! I predict that The next chapter has a high chance of geing amusing!
has cut out parts of my previous reviews! :'(
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 11 . 2/25
Note to Self:Snacking while reading Myst Shadows work is not advised!
Really you should add humor as the 2nd genre!
I hope its not just me that finds some of their situations humorous, and while there are a fair share of serious moments,well, the balance of serious vs humorous is very well balanced. This is just what I needed! :)
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 10 . 2/25
In the Trio's 'Choir/Dark Lord Percy' conversation, I had to take some pauses and stop reading a couple of seconds ,'cause the screen kept getting blurry.
Probably didn't help that I had tears in my eyes from suppressing laughter, don't want to wake up everyone, might get hit with shoes & pillows you know?
Also addressing your AN. if wizards and muggles teamed up to go against another opponent threatening them both, the one(s) they were fighting against would probably be obliterated.
It would make an interesting plot though if for some reason or another Dark, Light, and/or Grey Wizard's & Witch's had to drop most of their prejudices against each other to fight a common enemy, it would be...An exquisite site to as hell if you were the target, but fascinating.
':This is probably the longest review I've ever made! I just never really had much to comment on another Authors story besides the usual,'Like/loved it!' Guess that means your doing something right then! _
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 8 . 2/24
Hermione sure got the boys on that one didn't she?
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 6 . 2/24
On the last couple of sentences, I couldn't help but imagine Hermione shaking her head with an exasperated expression on her face, it took me a minute to get my mirth under control.
I really like this story! Your Golden Trio is almost exactly how I thought 's Trio should at least half does not simply go through the many years of life and death situations with the same two people over, and over again without having a VERY strong bond between the three!Even if two of the three don't like each other, the others become someone who you rely on, and are the first people to whom you look for first in a crisis/chaotic situation!
| Cream and Sugar chapter 12 . 2/19
Looking forward to the trials! So I take it to mean that Harry isn't going to be involved in the Triwizard Tournament this time around, since he won't be able to participate in the qualifying trials... I'm interested to see where you're going with this! Niffler Hunt Club sounds like a fascinating idea, I can't wait to see how it turns out. Poor Ron, haha. Your Ron is my absolute favorite, you've encapsulated all of his positive and negative qualities perfectly, I love it! I'm terribly tired of him being unfairly bashed in stories, it's unfortunately common for some reason. Your take on a more serious Golden Trio is just awesome beyond words. Please update again soon! :)
| sfjoellen chapter 13 . 2/18
extremely well written, with close attention to closing some of the infamous canon plot holes and making Harry, Hermione, and Ron believable. it's on my favorites list, and i hope for an update as soon as you can manage one.
Harry in canon was unbelievably passive.
I contend that the boy who walked through fire to face a Professor trying to steal the stone would never,, NEVER.. allow himself to be carved up for the amusement of a toad. some might claim he had matured and so endured. i don't buy it. at all.
in GoF they know Harry is a target but no one does a single thing to prepare him, help protect him. He doesn't have a portkey to the Head's office/Sirius. No one has a tracking charm on him.
thanks for writing! wonderful story!
| sfjoellen chapter 7 . 2/17
very well written, much poking at the structure of the magical world which i enjoy a lot. if you haven't read Harry Potter and the Witch Queen give it a read, he does an interesting thing with accidental magic and making someone smarter.
your characters are smart, they speak in different voices. the defense professor is interesting. he seems wildly intelligent, i like to think my vocabulary is good, his was dizzying.
thanks for writing!
| GBTtown chapter 13 . 2/16
Great story! Since no ships were discussed in the Summary I can't say I am overly surprised that it is looking a little Romione-ish. I usually hate Romione stories because they seldom explain just why they are attracted to one another. In canon they are so diametrically opposed in every way. Now, with JKR's on admission that she "could" have made a mistake" about that ship it is even more unlikely.
However, as I said in my first review, you have written a different Ron. While still not my favorite character (or the series would have been named after him) he is at least a full, loyal, member of the Golden Trio.
| EmilyWoods chapter 13 . 2/16
WHEN IS THIS STORY BEING CONTINUED...?
| GBTtown chapter 5 . 2/16
Good chapter with, for a major change, an almost tolerable RW. I know I am carrying over prejudice from JKR's character but, in too many instances he was just a (using one of my favorite descriptions of him) moRon! I'll try to withhold further judgement for the finish of the story.
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/13
is sirius going to get involved