Reviews for A Nun's Temptation
guest chapter 9 . 11/10/2014
Hinata is way too petite to be a 42C. The 42 refers to the bra's band length and a 42 is a plus size woman's size. The letter(s) refer to the cup size which reflects the actual breast size.
kandita chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
I am confuse as to why she have yet to visit her sister in the hospital. She went hope solely for that how come she have not reach Hanabi bedside as if yet
SXH foreva chapter 21 . 7/25/2014
Wait a minute sasuke IS a jerk
correction he is THEE jerk i dont think thers any A-character who is as hard-headed as this .emo he is a one of a kind and DID i not mention he is a hottie *blushes* ahhh {{havin fantisies of sasuke shirtless }}}man look wat this man does to ya OH LORD HAV MERCY
SXH foreva chapter 21 . 7/25/2014
wait a minute sasu-chan is a jerk correction sasu-chan is THE jerk Ther is no A-Character who is as hard headed as that .emo hahahaha *drying tears*
SXH foreva chapter 21 . 7/25/2014
What the flippin FUCK!i thought this was sasuhina okay...this is a uchiha party right where is the uchihas most importantly why did u make sasuke look like a jerk this story was a good time waster other than all that it was a pretty nice plot no offence k i love ystories
srasanswa chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
nice chapter
alonew chapter 21 . 8/17/2013
I like the plot, never dreamed of Hinata being a nun.
Even though I basically ship Sasuhina the most, this time I guess I'm going fully for Team Gaara hahahaha he sure is being sincere, and also friendzoned for too long xD
Maybe Hinata should just have the attitude to give herself in to chibi Hinata's desires hahahha
Waiting for more! But I know you writers have a life outside this world, so I know it must be difficult to keep up with everything (:
I will be following the updates o/
randomlittleme chapter 21 . 7/25/2013
Oh poor Gaara...I usually ship him with Gonads cause he's also a guy I would like her to be with but this is Sasuhina and that's my OTP in Naruto before anyone else and fortunately, Hinata doesn't feel the same way. Looking forward for her to see Sasuke again and develop more good or bad feelings for him that will eventually lead to love!:)
KagomeMarie chapter 21 . 7/21/2013
:( sad Gaara
kikyorocks543 chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
It's good
kikyorocks543 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I like it so far
FEARFLUFFLY chapter 21 . 7/18/2013
aaawwws poor deer! both of them
MusicIsMyLife6789 chapter 20 . 7/16/2013
I liked! It was well worded and interesting! The only problem I have us a few grammar errors and the plot is slightly unbelievable. You said that she had ran away while she was in school (high school I'm assuming), which means she would have been a nun for about 4-5 years, and as far as I know, nuns don't go from holy virgins to being alcoholics. So either she was a horrible nun, or you need to research what you're writing about. I don't mean to sound antagonistic, but if you research more on your topics and rewrote this, it could be a whole lot better.
xXYour DoomXx chapter 19 . 7/16/2013
A masquerade! Aww people are always soo stupid in those. You have a tiny bit of your face covered, who are you! I mean seriously man
chibi beary chapter 19 . 7/16/2013
Hinata should just marry gaara. Not only becoz he is always there for her, but also he knows how to value a woman's worth and proven himself tat he is man enough to treat hinata like an equal and also as a woman. It is something sasuke has not shown and proven himself. Coz I think at the end of the day, when someone like hinata wana marry and have kids, commitment is necessary in a relationship and I could see it in gaara instead of sasuke. Well tats just my two cents! :)

All in all, I love this type of story! Hard to see good ones out there! And welcome back!
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