|Reviews for Becoming|
| cursedgirl chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
AHH! More..more please hurry up!
| MochaCocaFan chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
beautiful, lucid and utterly brilliant. perfect.
| captaincatch chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
I loved this!
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Awsome story! You are an excellent writer! Amazing!
| Dr. Scott chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Nice ficlet...the idea that the bugs are telepathic is cool and would explain how the wraith get that ability as a hybrid human/bug. Hope you write again soon!
| burnmedown chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Very eloquent-I love how smoothly you've woven together Shep's human thoughts with his Iratus feelings. Well done!
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
This is a wonderful story idea (brilliant to have him 'almost understand' the iratus chittering), it truly moved me. I loved Shep's POV in this, his interaction with the bugs, and his care for the eggs/babies in the end almost made me cry.
Gorgeously written, great work of yours, Lauriel!
| Miran Anders chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Nicely done! The contrast between the two worlds he is bridging was masterfully done. A true fight within himself, an honest one. Great work. Thanks - Miran
| parisindy chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
O that was really really cool!