Reviews for First Comes Marriage
andie chapter 12 . 2/10
NEVER SAY THE END YOU FUCKING IDIOT!
itscheriee1 chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
What if Severus Snape found this happiness in his life at HP? So cute
elizabethrose1974 chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
love it! thank you!
Guest chapter 14 . 3/30/2017
I liked this story. Thank you for sharing.
scarletblackdies chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
Good story
GuardianLovegood chapter 6 . 11/3/2016
I am really enjoying your story so far but you really need to work on your spelling. Like, come on ling instead if lying and chocked instead of choked. I believe you need a new beta or maybe autocorrect. But the story is good so I'm not really complaining. Just...voicing my opinion.
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 12 . 5/1/2016
I liked this. There were many errors such as using to instead of too and others as well. However I enjoyed your plot and OOC Severus and Hermione. Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2016
tiring
Fantomette34 chapter 13 . 3/23/2016
Merci pour cette belle histoire et le partage !
Bonne continuation !
Sam chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
There are a few words spelt wrong so next time,try a bit harder consantrate more and if you don't know the specific spelling to a word look it up in a dictionary
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Hermione's middle name is Jean.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/1/2015
I'm sorry, but your poor grammar is very distracting from your storytelling. As a favor to your readers, please consider using a beta in the future. Thank you.
JullyBean chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
Wait Albus is gay in the books he cant be with Minerva.
JullyBean chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
I think their feelings are developing to fast. They have been married two days and they are talking about kids but before they got married they hated each other.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/3/2013
I love this story but please learn how to spell!
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