|Reviews for First Comes Marriage|
| andie chapter 12 . 2/10
NEVER SAY THE END YOU FUCKING IDIOT!
| itscheriee1 chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
What if Severus Snape found this happiness in his life at HP? So cute
| elizabethrose1974 chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
love it! thank you!
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/30/2017
I liked this story. Thank you for sharing.
| scarletblackdies chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
| GuardianLovegood chapter 6 . 11/3/2016
I am really enjoying your story so far but you really need to work on your spelling. Like, come on ling instead if lying and chocked instead of choked. I believe you need a new beta or maybe autocorrect. But the story is good so I'm not really complaining. Just...voicing my opinion.
| Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 12 . 5/1/2016
I liked this. There were many errors such as using to instead of too and others as well. However I enjoyed your plot and OOC Severus and Hermione. Thanks for sharing
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2016
| Fantomette34 chapter 13 . 3/23/2016
Merci pour cette belle histoire et le partage !
Bonne continuation !
| Sam chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
There are a few words spelt wrong so next time,try a bit harder consantrate more and if you don't know the specific spelling to a word look it up in a dictionary
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Hermione's middle name is Jean.
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/1/2015
I'm sorry, but your poor grammar is very distracting from your storytelling. As a favor to your readers, please consider using a beta in the future. Thank you.
| JullyBean chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
Wait Albus is gay in the books he cant be with Minerva.
| JullyBean chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
I think their feelings are developing to fast. They have been married two days and they are talking about kids but before they got married they hated each other.
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/3/2013
I love this story but please learn how to spell!