Reviews for A Snake In Sheep's Clothing, Part One: Honor
Anna Y. K chapter 14 . 9/23/2012
it was really good! I really love it...
I looked for Lucius and Severus pairing and couldn't come across better one.
They are just so cute! loved last scene kk
I'm gonna go read part two now! I hope that's just good as this one!
I really loved this fic! Thank you for writing it!
Naachan'sredhead chapter 6 . 8/14/2011
Gytha and Phinehas are both kickass is what I think. I like them very much and for some reason they sound like severus and lucius older canon selves to me.
Lady Knight Keladry chapter 14 . 8/10/2011
I'll admit, I was really leery of the story at first just because it seemed like a really alien/strange concept. However, I've come to like it a lot. While I wouldn't call the majority of the characters 'likable', they all have something that kind of draws the reader in. No one is wholly good or bad and I think you've made them realistic. It's horrible what happened to Severus but I think he'll come out the better for it. Great job with the story :)
LynnAsha chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
-insert heart here-
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 14 . 3/21/2011
Keep going
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 14 . 3/10/2011
intresting i look forward to seeing what you have in store
Cassie616 chapter 14 . 2/10/2011
wow, never read a lucius and snape before, this is a good start, a *very* good start :)

Amazing plot, great twists and I love the characterisation.

I hope you are writing more.
naru894 chapter 9 . 12/22/2010
yay! for severus! he made lucious think without thinking XD
lostsun chapter 7 . 12/11/2010
Okay, never mind about the chapter 5 review...this cleared things up.
lostsun chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
For chapter 5

This might be a stupid question, but did Lucius have sex with Severus to raise his magic, or just cuddle with him?
Stormshadow13 chapter 14 . 4/25/2010
Cool.

Poor Severus and Lucius.

I liked the Malfoys and Snapes in this story.
MajereImmortal chapter 14 . 4/15/2010
I LOVE this fic! hurry up to make more! really, i can hardly wait acually .
Ana-chan86 chapter 14 . 1/31/2010
This story sure is impressive. It must have taken a lot of time to get the story's structure right. I like the way you depict the characters and your plot is very intriguing. Let's see what happens in your second part...
trustingfrndshp chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
I love this fic and with the sequel I sometimes revisit... I love the conversation b/w the ansestors and how Lady Gytha wouldn't bend-thanks for sharing and hope to see more of the sequel soon!
raventekanya chapter 14 . 5/31/2009
i like it

peace out

alex
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