Reviews for UNFAITHFUL |
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![]() ![]() i nearly jumped from my chair when rukia said everything opened up |
![]() ![]() continue the story please T_T heres my email |
![]() ![]() Very funny and enjoyable. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() haha im laughed because of kun! love it |
![]() ![]() Very good, i loved how uryuu said the wrong write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! I love this one! And don't forget make a sequel for comatose! I love ur story! |
![]() ![]() Kya! SUGOI! Hurry up, give us the next chapter! I can wait! Please! -super cute puppy eyes- Pleasepleaseplease 100x Please! I can't wait! |
![]() ![]() Please make more chapters! i will definatly be one of the 1st to read it! i love how passionate u make the love scenes in this! please do more of that too! omg thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() please, please, please, continue making this! it is so amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey... continue the fic... duh... i... need... to... know... what... is... the... end... of... the... fic... please... (dying tone) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, this is silly.. reviewin on your own story.. lol to myself:: why the hell is your first chapter like this? i mean.. d-u-h i suppose what is in here is l-e-m-o-n? gyaah... and you have so many mistakes... grammatically speakin.. lol and not only that.. i think your story is loosing its spark just because the flow is beyond what you wish to write.. what you imagine *sobs* i know it is because you lack writing skills and its only your passion that keeps you going... but what if suddenly that spark/passion/ abandons you? imagination is power.. hope that 'imagination' that very thing that you possess will not leave you... wha? people really flatters you when they review.. but the very factor is that when a critique looks at this story.. -shame on you- *sighs* i know you write for people to see what is it that your mind is creating.. you write and write because that is your passion! to infinity and beyond! eh? -shin- goodluck in editing this story... be sure to give all your best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVES IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() ei! TNx! pLs read my fiC! hehehehe! waTs ur favor? iTs fiNe wiTh me! -NiCa- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue it! I really want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() hey where is the 5th chapter od unfathful if your finished please e-male it to me plz! i love your stories i have to read the ending |