|Reviews for Five Times Dean and John Nearly Lost Sam|
| luluguineapig chapter 1 . 7/4
Ooooh! This was so good! You're very talented.
| Iniysa chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Great story! My only suggestions would be separaters between scenes and maybe to add a bit to some of the scenes. Other peoples reactions and such. Anyways, I loved reading this.
| Yellowbulma chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Great story loved the ending )
| Sony Boy chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Dude, Yellow Eye/Azazel really is a part of Sam's early life. There at his birth, taking him to the Bus stop...makes you wonder when else he's been there.
| Ciya chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
The old dude was the YED? Creapy. Good story.
| friendly chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
that was really good.. great job..
| LazarusLady chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
| Poaetpainter chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
| noname32 chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
| sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Awesome oneshot. I like how you took things from Mary being pregnant with Sam to Sam's leaving for college. Nice flow!
| abni chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Great story! Love the way you use different phases of Sam's life, and the way you both start and end with the YED.
"It would figure, his inner voice would sound like Dean, rather than himself. If there was any justice in the world, Dean was tormented by an inner Sam voice as well." LOL!
"A father whose approval he had abandoned seeking years ago and a brother oblivious to how deeply hunting life had scarred him with invisible blades." Heartbreaking. I especially like the way you describe what the hunting life has done to Dean.
Hope you're going to post more stories, because I really enjoyed reading this!
| TammiTam chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Nice story. Hopefully you will write more.