heyy, i found this yesterday and have read it non stop! I adored it. Felt really frustrated with Draco being mean to her earlier on and kinda suspected she was due a breakdown when it happened! I love it

Enjoyed

Love of all the quotes at the beginning of every chapter

Really liked the story. Your Draco was really fun

Since I am a guest, I could use it to my full advantage.
Your story is bullshit. Fucking bullshit

I don't know how people read this fully
He is such a man whore with no lines of redemption. And your Hermione is a fool. I am stopping here.

I loved this story! And absolutely loved that there was a chapter called "Got milk?" and the next "No" lmao! I love how you wrote this so much!

Hilarious! I love Blaise in this fic... it's hard to believe you're not a potterhead tho! I love it so far

I just.. I hope you won’t take offence but I’d like to give a few tips because for me a couple of things did not make sense.

First of all, what was the point of having Draco continue to sleep witch everyone under the sun and their mother and not adres it at all?Hermione did not respond to it, it did not get talked about or explained. Even after their date he STILL goes out with other women?! I don’t give a crap for what reasons, not that he really explained it to her, as per usual. And he actually wants to kiss her goodbye after he informs her of this?! Sorry but that does not make ANY sense. He’s a jackass. Example;

"What did you do after the war?" asked Hermione in semi-deflection. "I mean I read the headlines - well, everyone did - but I don't know the details."
"You want the details?"
She shrugged. "Why not? We have all night."
Malfoy shifted in his seat, as if making himself comfortable before he told his story. "Alright. A brief history of my post-war life. I shagged a lot of women when it came out in the papers that I switched to the Light during the war and was as much a hero as Potty and Weasel. I shagged more women when I managed to get my inheritance back. I shagged even more women when I made a success of my business. So there you go." He finished, spreading his hands out, palms up in flourish.
"Fascinating," she commented dryly.

What is there to like about this man really? This brings me to the second thing I did not get. All the fighting. There was no let up, the fighting was pointless and frustrating because again, it did not get talked about. They fought and fought and fought and this Draco is not likable at all. He uses her as a slave until the point she basically passes out due to exhaustion and when she gets found she literally just gets up and goes back to work. And again, her feelings did not het explained and nothing gets discussed. Then after aaaaall the fighting and all that, her limit is him hiring her not due to her talent, but because of her fame? I mean, really? And after that the jackass finds random supermodel number 12, names her designer, dates her for a few months, flaunts her in her face and she forgives her because he called the paper and told the truth? He didn’t apologize, ever really, and Hermione decides to go out with him after that? And she actually has the audacity to question if she’s good enough for HIM?

There was no built-up for the relationship, no depth, no reason for me to like these characters that you’ve created. This story just left me really confused and frustrated.

Doesn’t mean you didn’t do something right. You kept me reading until the end so you know how to keep readers reading.

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LOVED IT!

Despite the asshole-y stuff Draco has done in the middle of the story, this was still so enjoyable! Thanks for this

Aww so cute!

Nahh that wouldn't be something to thank him for. He shouldn't have been an ass in the first place. And I don't really get the feeling that he cares about her since he's obviously still comfortable with "hanging out" with different girls. :/

What an asshole...