|Reviews for Insomnia|
| earthluva chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
This ... is so utterly amazing I barely have words for it 0.o The language, the descriptions, metophors, all of that ... you use it like a pro, and I just know I'm going to be thinking about this story for ages now!
I'm going to check out the rest of your stuff based purely on this XD
| Nike Athena chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Thank you for writing this- I've been looking all over this damned site trying to find SOMETHING that made sense when it came to Ryo and the Thief King. I like Ryo's final, resigned response (which I view as the whole fic) to the Spirit. And I can definitely see the Spirit muttering to keep himself awake. So, really, thank you; your little fic came as a breath of fresh air as a respite from mediocrity.
Isn't it a pity the better fics are the least reviewed?
| FreakNo94 chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
*sobs* ry-chan so poor thing!
...baku-kun poor thing too...
| DomesticatedWerewolves chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
(smiles and sighs) Doesnt everyone dread the upcoming event of sleeping? Or is it just fear? Perfectly done with a twist most of us have yet to realized.
Random Muse: (Though it looks a lot like Bakura) WTF is with you and being depressed?
(sigh) I dont know...i need my happy pills (actually, they're my ADD pills, but I find that they calm me down (like expresso...they TAKE THE EDGE OFF))
| Isis the Sphinx chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Methinks you have a little too much time to yourself.
This was very, very well written, and I enjoyed it. I had no idea I liked angsty stuff like this, and I can't get enough of it! Keep writing, Shadow, this was great.
| Darleneartist chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
This proverb in Ryou's words"Down righ scarry" I liked it alot though and is a very good one shot.
I like the end sentance-Death would be preferable to this.
I would place this just before the Ancient time line where Ryou tries to go to a church to clear his head and his yami takes over and starts things off.
You know what I mean. This is well written and thanks for posting it. Keep up the excellent writting. Darlene.