|Reviews for Barbed Revelation|
| HappyDeathFairy chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
I loved reading this story! It was very cute and I can see them interacting that way as if it was in the manga!
| Ash chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
my favorite Angel Sanctuary fanfiction on this site :)
| Sapphire-sama Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
| shy.smile chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
| EwigD chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
I rather enjoyed your story, and overall I thought it was pretty good, the cut didn't seem abrupt to me, well placed and served it's purpose very well. I did, however, have some objections regarding the characterization. For one I think that Setsuna's fear of tainting Sarah or making her hate him was much too strong for him to let go that way in front of her, coupled with his own inability to believe she could love him back I have a hard time seeing him giving in to his emotions that way. As for Sarah's own feelings, I don't think she really realized what his feelings were for her until the events of the manga either, and in turn that's why she neer showed her own feelings to him, contenting with being just his sister, but from the flashbacks, particularly everything concerning the ring, I thought it was clear that she'd had feelings for him all along as well, but as you said, she just never showed the depth of them, until the events of the manga. Mind you, that is just my own interpretation, so it might very well be flawed. I think if they'd had an event like this one they would have both come to realize and share each other's feelings much sooner, which would make an interesting take on the story really.
SxS is one of my all time favorite OTP though, so I might just be too obssessive about the details, I really loved your story, and despite my above objections I still thought that the characterization was very nice all in all, I could actually imagine a younger Setsuna with less control over his emotions giving in actually, so in that it was very good, and I really enjoyed how playful you made them. I think your description at the end is realyl perfect, they truly are the epitome of what love should be between two people, and I think you captured that essence in your fic.
| miarath chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Awesome! You did a wonderful job on describing Setsuna and Sara's love for each other.. I love this one. _
| Amoenus Cordis chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Very well written though it really didn't need to be M rated...
| pearlgirl710 chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
i love this. i think it's absolutely completely AMAZING X3
| Hermonthis chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
The quality of this story is fabulous. The overall playfulness, the realization of becoming more than just best friends/confidants, the amazing lyrical flow of the writing - amazing.
| Rinhail chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
| Naruto's sexy demon chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
That was really good, I liked the playfulness of them, but you kinda made your words kinda quick and that I kinda got me of track. Other then that, it was really good.
| Lunacat7 chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
The desperation, angst and blankness that Setusna feels considering the fact, that his love for Sara is one-sided and impossible are really impressive in your story.
| AvalonAri chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
OMG this was like...wow. i wish i had the money for the DVD T.T
anyway, i think this should have been rated T, cause there was nothing really that hinted at an M rating.
just an opinion.
| Yearofthedragon chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
I loved you story you captured the characters well!. Keep up the good work
| cici chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
i really enjoyed this..i would really love it if you would think about cont. this story...also for anyone who want to see this show they should check it out on youtube thats where i found it. well if you do more with this story ornot i really enjoyed it