Reviews for Nights in the Big City
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Just finished reading this for the first time in years. It really is good, hope you think about writing your own original stuff one day.
scorpioneldar chapter 44 . 10/7/2014
personally i lloved the feel of this fic
very well done wish there was more but this is a good ending
i read this all in 2 days did not sleep much last night
felt really relistic and smooth thanks for the fun ride
a new big fan
Aronim chapter 12 . 6/30/2014
I'm beginning to wonder how anyone can mistake this verse's Kim for the regular one. The one that is kidnapped right now seems both easily manipulated and manipulative herself. She sounds like a less openly malicious Bonnie, just without the confidence that regular Bonnie actually has.
Aronim chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
Oh, this is so awesome. The narration is full of character and the constant barrage of "wait, that was who? And they're what in this world?" is brilliant.

Man, took me a couple of repeat readings to get what you meant with Wade and porn. Thank heavens. At first I thought he'd been starring, not just running the business. Guuuh.
ShadowDancer01 chapter 44 . 4/1/2014
One of my favorite stories. You capture the hard-boiled feel as well as Hammett or Chandler. I love the back story you give Shego here and think you nailed all of the KP characters. I have re-read this story at least six times in the last six months.
honoradele chapter 44 . 8/5/2013
Great story! I hope that will do some more with or without either set of Kiron. Not that I would turn some KiRon but I do love your Sasha.
ColdGoldLazarus chapter 11 . 12/14/2012
Pretty good story, but the dialogue borders on incomprehensible sometimes, as it's often difficult to tell who's who. :/
holydemon00 chapter 44 . 11/19/2012
What a gripping adventure. The narration from Sasha/Shego's POV was ingenious. And K/R becomes even fluffier from her observation. The alternative universe travel is done really well and fitting of the whole noir/semi-realistic atmosphere. This is probably the best AU story I've ever read on the website. Too bad it takes me 4 years to discover this gem of a story (Not so much, considering that I've only re-discovered KP 2 months ago)
Reader101w chapter 44 . 1/20/2011
Excellent story,

Greatly written, and completely Sasha's POV.

I enjoyed how Sasha's world was different and somehow the same. The ending was action packed and very suspenseful down to the end. The epilogue was touching and made for a great end. Now let's hope Sasha get's a new arm.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

Reader101w chapter 24 . 1/19/2011
Still going great,

Interesting that Ron's powers still work.

One little question though, are Kimberly and Ronald from slightly later in their own universe, since they already finished high school? And are they thus older than Kim and Ron from the story universe?

keep up the very good writing that you do,

Reader101w chapter 23 . 1/19/2011
Great story so far.

I really like the way Sasha tells the story, as if she is explaining the whole story to the reader like the reader is having a drink with her.

More former villains are shown, some even seeming more dangerous than in Kimberly's universe.

Just how estranged is the history of this world from Kimberly's original? It seems that a lot it subtly but significantly different.

I hope to rest the rest soon.

keep up the very good writing that you do,

Reader101w chapter 5 . 1/18/2011
Just started this one, and I have to say; great work!

It took me a moment to get what was happening, but your description from Sasha's point of view is great.

I hope to read the rest soon.

keep up the very good writing that you do,

graypheonix chapter 44 . 11/21/2010
Heh, awesome story, and well worth the read. Continue to write, and enjoyed the tale. Update your others stories soon, ja ne.
Epicurus chapter 44 . 10/26/2010
Wow. I'm impressed. Well plotted, and the history major in me loved seeing the geopolitics as a background for this world of yours. I loved your characterizations, especially Ron (not something I usually say; people aren't often good at writing him). Sasha struck me as amongst the better "what-if" characterizations of Shego I'd seen.

Part of me really wants to know: what happened when Kim got back to her world? We heard a bit about Shego and Drakken's responses, but only their first impressions. I like that, actually, even though it was frustrating, and I think I see why you did it. Still, leaves me wondering.

Perhaps my only criticism is that the Demenz aspect, which emerged late, seemed to be shoehorned in. With only one reading, I can't say for certain, but a bit more buildup to the final confrontation would have sold it better. It all makes sense, and works quite nicely, but I couldn't help feeling as though the "it's the Germans!" aspect was really only Sasha's crazy hunch–which happened to be borne out by events. Again, maybe I missed something, but a clue here or there would have brought the "mystery" aspect home.

Still and all, kudos on an impressive work, easily one of my favorites.
SteveMB chapter 44 . 2/15/2010
I came to this one a bit late (found it from the TVTropes fanfic recommendations page). It grabbed my attention after the first hints of a well-developed alt-universe setting, and just kept getting better and better with the ways the corresponding characters fit in - recognizably themselves, but different in ways that made sense given their circumstances.

The noir setting with so many characters with hidden agendas makes the story a bit of work to follow, but it pays off.

A comment on The Enduring Man-Child's question about the message Sasha sent to our Drakken - remember, in the alt-universe, Lipsky's medical research saved both her parents from nasty deaths (implying that Shego's parents in the mainstream universe met that fate because our Lipsky/Drakken became a villain instead). You know, I think Kim might be right about "she'd kill him"...
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