Reviews for These External Manners of Lament
bally2cute chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Well written, beautiful, emotional, amazing...all things I look forward to with one of your stories. Excellent work, thank you for sharing!
Left Hook chapter 1 . 5/28/2007

*so much*
JazzyIrish chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Just a wonderful tag, Refur. I love the way you wrote this tragic event from Bobby's point of view. He really cares for those boys, really treats them as if they were his own. He genuinely tried to help Dean, to save Dean, and you've written that so well here. Thanks for giving us Bobby's tinge of hope at the end - we need it.

Thanks for sharing all your amazing stories with us. I'm sorry that you won't be posting them here anymore, but I'll check out your LJ page from time to time. Until next time...
Brigid Tanner chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
That's beautiful. Loved the repeats of "Bobby's not a young man, not any more". Almost like the chorus to a song.
Poaetpainter chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
wow awesome story
Isobel Swan chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Very good. Nice to have Bobby's POV.
LadyFFVic chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
This was amazing. Thank you for leaving it with a note of hope.
Linnie McCary chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Ah, that was EXTREMELY satisfying! Thanks!
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