Reviews for Forgotten Mistake
Dark-bat chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Wow. This is very haunting. And while I've never seen someone die, let alone in that violent a manner, I can definitely imagine what Kitty was feeling, especially since you wrote so realistically.

I also like it how you didn't give us a ton of information about the circumstances- who the shooter was, why Pete and Kitty were together, etc.

Definitely a good story!
Hawaiichick chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Aw! This is so sad...but such a good story. Thanks!