|Reviews for Memories|
| ker-plop chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Interesting; I was wondering if Hiro couldn't be descended from Alex and Luna somehow... though I was thinking it was a few generations down the line, heh.
Anyway, the grammar and spelling need a little work, but it's a good start. Hope to see more soon.
| Angel Peach Blossom chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
I'm not sure if something is wrong. It depends on what villgae baby Hiro was in during his 'strange dream'.
I don't know what your original version was like, but I'm sure you have improved!