Reviews for Chocolate
Lilica chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
I'm only 10 but that was really good and funny!
Lolfatheads123 chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
Sorry Xemnas. Sorry. JK!
Ldrmas chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
awesomely awesome
xXUndertaker-19Xx chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
haha funny, loved it :)
TheFluffyBakura chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Hahahahahaha xD Nice nice, oh and Xemnas? All the tissues are in those kids room by the way x3 MUAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA
FellowFlamersUnite chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
You done really well and I would offer xemnas a tissue, but I need them all to keep the blood loss from killing me

dam nose bleeds
OrgasmicYaoi chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
*giggles madly* All i can say is hot as hell. The last part funny *snickers* Pervert much. Good Job
jnungkook chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
*hugs Xemnas* It's okay... I know how you feel...

That was SO FUCKING HOT. o_o that's ALL I can say.

Karaoke-Kitten chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Keeper of Fatestones chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
DeRoAx? *died of a massive nosebleed, please see an alternate persona for a review*

Etna: ... smut

Riki: ...What was that?

Wild1: *squeals in delight*

Barbara: Oh my... Quite well written...

*all other personas died of nosebleeds as well*
Will This Night-Drag-On chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Ahh...Xemnas. We know he's a closet perv, he just won't admit it.
Cleonhart chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
LOLOLOLOL Loved the ending XD It was all a big mess of hoot smeyness. GOOD JOB 8DD
The Last thing you Never See chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
DAMN! That was hot. *dies from massive nosebleed.* I love Xemnas's last line. I can just imagine him doing that. Loved it! The world needs more stories like this.
Isabella and me chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
0/o where are the tissues indeed?
Tazalicious chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
lmao i laughed so hard at the last line.. heck im still laughing at it

that was awsum xP

stil laughing hahaha ahh..

good job xP
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