|Reviews for Come Closer|
| AkuZeku chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Ok, so usually I love to writing long reviews, especially if I really enjoyed a story. And I did enjoy this story! I love posessive, stalker-ish Ken! (Well I just love Ken, how could I now love him? He and Daisuke were, in my humble opinion, the only characters in Digimon 02, who really had well descriped personalities, that changed during the series. Like growing in personality, I mean.) Aren't they both hot?! I loved the ending, even though If I had thought about it earlier and wouldn't have been so totally absorbed in the story and it's wonderfully descriped sensations, I could have found out earlied what you had in mind. But I didn't and I liked the surprise. You've done a great job with this fanfiction and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
| Riku Murasaki chapter 5 . 6/25/2011
That was SO great. And I feel it was utterly perfect that, while reading this, my music player thought it appropriate to play Quicksand by La Roux as I was reading. It was all so stalker-tastic. XD
| Olynara Sedai chapter 5 . 2/10/2011
That was fucking wonderful. This story deserves every one of the reviews its gotten so far, it is wonderful in every way. The personality you gave them- specifically, the carnality of the personality you gave them, was just perfectly spot on, and you managed to match the vocabulary perfectly. While Ken's split personality issues make him difficult to characterise, this wonderful mix of uncertain and haughty is lush and likely and hot. Guh. I absolutely adored this fic, and the building tension with each sense was just perfect. Read the first, looked at the chapter titles, and knew I couldn't stop. But better than that, you made each chapter integral to the mini-fic. If you skip one, you're missing out on something. You don't want to skip ahead to taste because even sound has a raw, sensual edge to it, and the build up is as important as the *cough* climax, for lack of a less double-meaning causing word.
... god dammit I enjoyed reading this.
| AngelOfPastPresentAndFuture chapter 5 . 11/13/2010
Brilliant! Seriously, I love your Ken, I really dislike it when his all girly and teary and you just portrayed him fantastically. The theme with the senses was nice and the flow of the chapters was smooth and interesting.
| Animeyaoimaster chapter 5 . 6/17/2010
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| 404626 chapter 5 . 12/19/2009
Oh man, I first read this with only one chapter. Now it's even more awesome. Great writing, like everything else I've read from you, and I love the characterization. The five senses was a great touch too.
| jessica499499 chapter 5 . 8/14/2008
That was really grammer.
| Snowfalcon chapter 5 . 12/19/2007
Cool story, I especially liked how each chapter was themed around one of the 5 senses. Man, I wish things like this really happened to us normal people. I had a guy I used to watch in the cafeteria in college that I used to hope to meet. I never spoke to him, but always tried to position my seat so I could watch him and sometimes our gazes would meet. Lost oppertunities, but not much I can do now. It was mostly out of curiousity, cuz he was hot and single. *grins* Oh well. Good story, I liked how Ken was so confident, but Daisuke was the one who made all the moves. .
| Even Gods Dream chapter 5 . 12/16/2007
Oh good god.
*makes absolutely inaudible noises*
That was amazing.
Read it all in one go. I don't know how I'd missed it before, but, like, woah.
That ending got my heart racing.
You're genius ma'am, pure fucking genius.
| Inumaru12 chapter 5 . 10/20/2007
*squeal* yay! I loved it! way to go!
| xYaoiGirlx chapter 5 . 9/9/2007
Wo! Beautiful! Haven't read a Daiken in a while! Or rather a Kensuke! :D