|Reviews for Dragon Without Eyes|
| TheThirdAetas chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I can't believe this only has three reviews!
Your style of writing in here is simplistic, but it does nothing to make it any less hypnotic. It gives such beautiful imagery without overdosing it in purple prose...and it definitely is better considering it's RaphxLeo! What a plus for me. ;)
I also love how you described that Karai was saying something but Leo couldn't make out her words - it really makes me feel like I'm out on some grimy New York roof top in the freezing night, trying to make out what she's saying but the only thing I can hear is the roar of the pouring rain.
And the comparison of Leo and the dragon painting? Ingenious.
You really know how to make words come alive yourself.
Augh, you just put everything perfectly...I really can't describe all the wonderful things about your story.
Thank you so, so much for posting this!
| Alonein-Darkness7 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Oh this was wonderfully done. It was almost like poetry in a way.
| Loke0 chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
This is good, very touching :) any chance of an update?
| Reijiro chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I love the imagery you always evoke. Have I told you that before? Probably boring you with it now... heh.
I must admit I have a bit of a boat going for Leo/Karai, so I had to wonder just what she was yelling at him. It was left open enough for any interpretation really, and that was a very nice touch IMHO.
Anywho, usual spiel; loved it, fav'd it, lookin' forward to more from you.