Reviews for The Legacy
a-big-apple chapter 4 . 3/5/2008
Awesome! I'm excited to read more, this fic is really compelling.
omasuoniwabanshi chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
Welcome back!

Terrific chapter! I see you jumped right back into writing after your much-deserved holiday, much to your readers' delight. I loved the way Leonardo's brothers reacted to his wounds. The family dynamic there is really endearing. I don't know who was more shocked that Karai bandaged him. She's quite the mystery. Who on earth was she talking to in the bathroom? The servant girl must've thought her mistress had really lost it. I'm intrigued, especially by the enigmatic last two words.

Can't wait to read more!
Sassyblondexoxo chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
LOL, I think that we'll all forgive you for writing Underdark :)

Great chapter. Love the Karai Leo relationship that you're forging. It's realistic, perfectly done. In fact, ALL of the turtles are kept in character extremely well - I especially liked Raph and Mike in this chapter.

*Throws you a box of cookies* There, now you don't have to get up from your computer, and you can write the next chapter.

Cheers! SASSY
xZig-zagx chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
Buw ha! Yes, kill them all! Make them stay dead for once! _ Fun chapter. I didn't mind the mention of blood over and over. Nice to have more chpaters from you!
mav32 chapter 3 . 1/26/2008
Dude! Are you gonna finish this? It's freaking awesome and I'm dieing to know what happens here. the whole Leo/Karai interaction is amazing. I like their relationship too, the not-love realtionship. It's really interesting and I think you kept everyone in character really well.
lost-katana chapter 3 . 12/27/2007
(finds story) Ah! Oh, it's so awesome! You must update it soon- I'm dying to find out what happened!

Good job. You're one of the most fantastic authors I've ever seen.
wlk68 chapter 3 . 12/17/2007
More? I need to know what kind of shape Leo is in. He's my favorite. :-)
Merdeka21 chapter 3 . 12/10/2007
So, I'm intrigued ] Continue please!
ProcurerFaith chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
I've only read the first chapter so far, but I like it! i especially enjoyed the descriptions of Master Splinter following the 'mental thread' to his absent son. Leo seems very in-character - I like the way he speaks, it's just like him.

*grins* Do we get to see what Leo says about his candles later on? _
Vladiemma chapter 3 . 11/20/2007
Argh, come on, you can't stop it there! I wanna know what happens! By the way, very beautifully writen, I love the way you portrai them. And I can see from the update that this story is propally on hold or something, but please, I really want to know what happens...
Lovova chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
Leo! What's wrong!

Why is there so much blood 0.0 I don't remember her injuring him -that- badely.

Love your tmnt stories. All of them...they rock! You Rock!
Alora05 chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
Its me again! Im trawling through you're fanfics now... Dont you feel honoured! . lol.

Once more, i have to compliment you on you're brilliance in capturing the turtles characters. *applauds* I can even see the scenes running through my head... . But that's what imaginations are for! And your's is by far a imaginative one, lol. (i couldn't think of a better word .)

Well, its now...late, im off to bed.

Totally awesome fic dude/ dudette (i have read ur profile! But its late, and i can't remember you're gender, so i wanted to cover my backside incase i got it wrong)
IAmTheWalrus909 chapter 3 . 8/17/2007
Are you going to update? I hope so. It's a nice little mystery you have going on here...
xZig-zagx chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Half the time I think all he has to do is look at someone the wrong way and he has an enemy for life

Hehe, you had to stick that line in there didn't you? XD Yes! I'm actually reading and reviewing! I have very little else to do and you're too busy making AMVs to pester, so I thought I'd read your fic. I'm really enjoying it so far, even though you told me a bit about it I'm curious to see how I get there.
EagleBlaze chapter 3 . 7/31/2007
Another good fanfic :-). I wonder what happened to Leo and what Karai was really up too. I'll just have to wait and find out. Its also strange that Karai's getting sick...hmm...maybe it has something to do with taking in all of that negative energy from the original Shredder or something.

Keep up the very good work and I hope you update soon!

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