Reviews for Snow
Akane Nyx chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Just started reading Rogue/Logan fics.

This... This is just...Wow.

At first you think maybe they're celebrating. Like, She finally learned to control her mutation and he promised they'd go north once she did. And there's no words but that's okay because they're not really the sort of people that need them - all the silences are comfortable ones.

And then you get the inkling that maybe it's because she's wanting to see the snow for the last time... Like she's dying... The not wanting to eat, her weighing nothing, him helping her dress and combing her hair... Something slow. Something that he could have used his mutation and her touch save her from... Maybe if she hadn't got the cure?... But he agreed... To let her die somewhere with some peace and dignity and to let her do it alone...

And then that last paragraph... The truth that she's already gone... The carefully crafted way you turn the angst into rage...


... Well I suppose I was overdue for a good cry...
DarthTaco chapter 1 . 8/29/2009

Beautiful, touching, and depressing.
ElizaV chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Logan seems to have gone slightly insane. But he keeps his promises.
atruwriter chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Wow. That is so tragic and unbelievably beautiful in some twisted way. I feel so sorry for him. He's a little crazy, but it's rather... I don't think sweet is the word. Perhaps, bittersweet. Incredibly writing!
silverstarkakashi4eva chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
i had to read this story three times before i actually got it. very subtle. good job
Katie chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I really don't understand how you don't manage to get hundreds and thousands of reviews. Believe me: I literally never review. The fact that no one else seems to be, though, well, that pushed me to actually comment on your brilliant work. I love your writing method: precise, leading, but there's a loophole in the story that no one can catch until the end.

Great job! :-)