Reviews for Free Fall
Poaetpainter chapter 2 . 9/9/2007
Amazing exorcism at thousands of feet above.

Loved the ending btw.
sams1ra chapter 2 . 6/29/2007
That was a perfect ending. LMAO. Good one )
Nvrmore chapter 2 . 6/11/2007
Awesome. Very nicely done. I'm glad Haley was in on it. (my curiosity wonders who the other two hunters were. :) )

I thought it ended perfectly, too. hee hee. Love the scene with Dean chasing down his brother. Classic.

Thanks for writing.
Nvrmore chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
So... I'm finally getting around to reviewing. Sorry Sweetie, for the really long delay... anyway.

Love the chapter. I really like the back and forth between the present and the every slowly counting down past.

Hee hee. Love that Sam has actually been skydiving before. That's great.

I'm off to chapter 2...
Xdaisy chainX chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
lol! cute fic. loved it, really sweet idea lol.

poor dean and his fear of flyingness.

really well written, i loved the format of it with the past and present together.


ciel4 chapter 2 . 6/3/2007
Hey Cat, great job on part 2! I think you got the dialogue between the boys just right, (did I say that for Part 1 as well? I meant to!) and I really liked this piece of description:

It was as if someone had pressed a giant mute button on the remote control of the world.

The ending was fun too, because you allowed the reader to use their imagination and left it up in the air ... so to speak!
supergirl3684 chapter 2 . 6/2/2007
Not only did I finish the chapter but I loved it! Something tells me Sam better use those long legs less he wants Death by Dean! Good job
historylover chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
Great job, Cat. I really enjoyed this fic. Poor Dean. You gotta feel sorry for him. But, Sam is completely dead when Dean recovers from the shock of him jumping of a the plane.

Loopynlovinit chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
Beist again You crack me up! I'm glad Sifi and Dream didn't let you forget about this one! Keep it up!
devonshire64 chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
great story, alot of fun to read.
J.A. Carlton chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
SPLEE! Whoo hoo! Thank you so much beloved one!

and ...

Run Sammy! Run... stretch those legs out! Ah you keep running I'll run intereference...



Seriously sweetie you did really great with this! IT was just as much fun as I knew you could make it! So thank yOU!


friendly chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
very cute..

good job
Dream Horizon chapter 2 . 5/31/2007

words just cannot describe how much I love this chapter. You capture the brothers so well and even though this was not my first read of this chapter I found my nose getting closer and closer to the screen...

And just so you know I am STILL laughing at the thought of Dean chasing Sam! lol...

Love this story - favourited and everything...

Hope we didn't nag you too much..I'm not sorry though because we got a fantastic story from you! Thank you!

heather03nmg chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
"I think it was the fact that we didn’t get to teach him how to do a proper landing that tipped the cup over… that and the fact that when he actually was on the ground the wind picked grabbed his parachute and dragged him all the way over there…”

The mental image I have after reading that scene...I can't stop giggling!

Loved the story, you did an awesome job writing the boys and the story was hilarious!

Cookies for you, write more soon!
Rachelly chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
Great ending! I loved the boys conversations leading up to the whole jump...Sam's sensitivity and willingness to call it off for Dean's sake and Dean's determination to save another life. Loved that Sam was taken and it was up to Dean to save him. I'm glad Haley was there or we'd probably had two splattered Winchesters to mourn over. Yay, Dean saved the day with latin and loved the ending with Dean chasing Sam to kill him. Very fun and well done! Great job!
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