Reviews for Closer to Perfection 2: Jewel of the Night
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Overall not bad but need to make the lemon a bit longer
DarthGlacier chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
...how did i not see this before. _; short yet HAWT!
Lemon Crisis chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Nice lemon (), although it was a bit shorter than what I'm used to.

I shall have to poke you into writing more like this *pokes you*

*snickers* Good stuff!
Elvenstrike chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
...wow...me likes...
Midnite OniHime chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
MN, MERLA UNI:...O.O...

-thud-

MERLA:*rolls eyes* there goes Uni again.

UNI: Uh, it wasn't me...

MERLA UNI: *look over to see MN out cold on the floor*

MERLA:*anime fall* oh my GAWD the auld sod actually feinted! where's Rae when you need her?

UNI: *blinks* I think some serious congrats are in order Meegz... Well done on an impeccible lemon, Getting a good handle on our own personal Mona Lisa, and last but not least, stunning MN into unconciousness... a very rare treat indeed.

MERLA: Hear hear! but, if you don't mind I'm going to go work on those Vodka smoothies I've been thinking about...
StormRaven333 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
RAVEN: So...you like, Stormy?

STORM: ...*puts 2 and 2 together about the MSN thing but can only say one word...

JESUS!

RAVEN: *grins* Well...that sounded VERY possitive Megz XD

STORM: *is scarlet* I...um...don't ...know...what...to say...uhh...wow... *pulls a Goku* .

RAVEN: *High 5's Megz * Great stuff there Megz . say...you're pretty good at this.

STORM: *chokes on air* /you're giving her ideas!/

CELL: All the better to please you with my little Gem.

STORM: "..." I think that's my queue to - *gets grabbed by Cell* JA NE! *I.T*