Reviews for Sentry Duty
ThJaFl chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Nice. I suggest that you emphasise exactly how much she hates buggy, boggy places, and that maybe she faints at the end? That would need a second chapter, but from what I remember, stormwing wings are sharper than razors. If she was there when she took of, wouldn't she get cut, and maybe faint from blood loss? Also, how did she know he was Ozorne? Just curious. Will you add a second chapter? If you don't lie the above idea, you could ask the rider groups to go out and try to catch Ozorne.
sophia666 chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Poor Miri. With nasty Ozorne sneaking up on her like that... Great writing.
Me chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
I liked it. It's like nothing I've seen so far!